Astatula (Final Edition)
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Affair"A young boy tries to turn his life around.Can he?
13 total reviews
Comment from snowhood
That was good, very intense and kept my interest. Liked the story line and it peaked my interest in future chapters, as any good read should.
Very nice
Thanks
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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That was good, very intense and kept my interest. Liked the story line and it peaked my interest in future chapters, as any good read should.
Very nice
Thanks
Comment Written 07-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Much more to come so stay tined. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Kooky Clown
It continues to impress with it' never ending tale of mystery and suspense I think as usual. Another great episode I only wish they came out sooner so I could keep up in my mind what has happened and what is happening now
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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It continues to impress with it' never ending tale of mystery and suspense I think as usual. Another great episode I only wish they came out sooner so I could keep up in my mind what has happened and what is happening now
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you are enjoying this story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Brent,
Just stepping into your novel. For newcomers like me, may I suggest that you insert a little synopsis of the story at the beginning of the chapter or in author notes.? It'll really help.
Looks like Werner has got himself into a real soup. The poor wife.
An interesting read.
Have a great weekend. Until next time,
Sonali
Werner responded(,) as (cool) as a cucumber.
Both of them held reasons. ... not sure what you mean by this line.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Hello Brent,
Just stepping into your novel. For newcomers like me, may I suggest that you insert a little synopsis of the story at the beginning of the chapter or in author notes.? It'll really help.
Looks like Werner has got himself into a real soup. The poor wife.
An interesting read.
Have a great weekend. Until next time,
Sonali
Werner responded(,) as (cool) as a cucumber.
Both of them held reasons. ... not sure what you mean by this line.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
Comment from MTF1955
Great job. Really like your characters. Your dialogue moves the story along effortlessly. Look forward to the next chapter. Mary
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Great job. Really like your characters. Your dialogue moves the story along effortlessly. Look forward to the next chapter. Mary
Comment Written 03-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
I agree with Daniels' assessment that Werner is no serial killer. He may be a two-timing, cheating husband, but doesn't sound like a serial killer. Oh, oh! It looks like the sheriff and his deputy have come to a parting of the ways. Taylor insists on making trouble between him and Cody. He seems very determined to make life miserable for Cody. Taylor will not take kindly to the suspension, and will probably be more determined to undermine Daniels. Great characterization. judi
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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I agree with Daniels' assessment that Werner is no serial killer. He may be a two-timing, cheating husband, but doesn't sound like a serial killer. Oh, oh! It looks like the sheriff and his deputy have come to a parting of the ways. Taylor insists on making trouble between him and Cody. He seems very determined to make life miserable for Cody. Taylor will not take kindly to the suspension, and will probably be more determined to undermine Daniels. Great characterization. judi
Comment Written 03-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're very welcome. Happy trails! judi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I think I missed this chapter. It makes the one I already reviewed make more sense.
Poor farmer has just cooked his own goose with the Mrs.
Why did Deputy Taylor get fired? I missed something.
Great story,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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I think I missed this chapter. It makes the one I already reviewed make more sense.
Poor farmer has just cooked his own goose with the Mrs.
Why did Deputy Taylor get fired? I missed something.
Great story,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. He got fired for false arrest and defamation of character in telling the Press Werner was the Astatula Assassin when he was innocent of the crimes.
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Oh, okay, thanks. I figured I had missed something, and I was right! Glad he's fired!!!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Poor little Cody. In trouble again, but I don't believe it is of his making. What reason does the deputy have for his mistreatment of Cody. What could he possibly have against a boy Cody's age? I'm glad he is suspended. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Poor little Cody. In trouble again, but I don't believe it is of his making. What reason does the deputy have for his mistreatment of Cody. What could he possibly have against a boy Cody's age? I'm glad he is suspended. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Okay I missed something. Why did he demand deputy's badge?
Excellent tension going on and many problems brewing.
Very well writen
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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Okay I missed something. Why did he demand deputy's badge?
Excellent tension going on and many problems brewing.
Very well writen
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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False arrest and publicly naming Fred Werner the Astatula Assassin without any proof. Glad you are enjoying this story. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Thanks for writing another chapter to your story as I'm always looking forward to reading what you write. This was really great and held my interest all the way through. I really like how you wrote this line: "All we have been doing is going around like a spinning top."
Kat
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Hi Brett,
Thanks for writing another chapter to your story as I'm always looking forward to reading what you write. This was really great and held my interest all the way through. I really like how you wrote this line: "All we have been doing is going around like a spinning top."
Kat
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story. Hang in there. Much more to come.
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As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading until it's time for me to go to heaven. ( : Kat
Comment from misscookie
You mean to tell me there's a crooked cop. No a cop who did the killing.
This is a twister for me now.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
Cookie
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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You mean to tell me there's a crooked cop. No a cop who did the killing.
This is a twister for me now.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
Cookie
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Glad you enjoyed this misscookie.
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Me too, until next time.
Cookie
