Comment from jaho58

Exceptional

I absolutely love this personification of the seasons. Both are aptly and colorfully portrayed as they enter and exit their respective showtimes.

I see you only have one vote so far; it obviously did not reach the right audience.

ENCORE!!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. I appreciate your thoughts on this one, cheers, j

Comment from JennC

Excellent

I love this! It creates such a wonderful visual on its own, and even more so when paired with the artwork you chose. Your syllable count is spot on, and this is a delightful entry. Well done! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

When I first saw your title, I wondered if perhaps you had made a mistake and meant 'review.' It is one of my pet peeves when an author can' even spell their own title/subtitle correctly.

But no, your title is a clever reference to the theatrical theme explored in your little poem. The personification is excellent, with the impatient autumn tapping her foot as she waits for the stage-hog summer to clear the wy.

Very well done.

Steve

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

Comment from nehasri

Excellent

Brilliant! What a lovely capture in such few words. Beautiful illustration as well. I am wondering how to find fault. Perfect!

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi
What a lovely little ode to autumn haiku. Perfect 5'7'5 syllable count, lovely presebtatuin and really loved your 3rd line: summer takes a bow

Great job and gl

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, cheers, j