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Poems By AnnieDawn

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My book of poems and stories

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Comment from Spitfire
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I love heath bars too. And for sure, some desserts are better than sex (depending on the partner.LOL) Hey, why not share the recipe with us?

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
    Thanks for reviewing and I agree with you...lol I have given the recipe to many so here it is...
    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package german chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wodden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crusshed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
reply by Spitfire on 21-Jul-2016
    Thank you so much. Sounds heavenly. I'll cut and paste it.
reply by Anonymous Member on 25-Jul-2016
    Thank you so much. Sounds heavenly. I'll cut and paste it.
Comment from GeraldS
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Nicely worded. This is an intriguing thought. I like Heath too. But then I haven't met very many candy bars I didn't like.

I have only two questions. Where's the recipe? And, why wasn't it included in the "Author Notes?"

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing. I give to those that have asked. Enjoy.

    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package German chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according to package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Great job on this 5-6-5 Candy contest entry. Love that it rhymed so well and the picture of the cake made me want to lick my monitor. Better than sex cake, huh? That must be pretty damn good! lol...Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing. Enjoy the cake.

    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package German chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according to package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 30-May-2016
    oh my God! Sounds decadent but delish! Will have to try! God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Hi love your pic and the cute poem...
Heath bar is one of my favorites and also I have had the cake
you mentioned.. Love that pineapple.
It appears you have met the syllable count in your post.
Best wishes...
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing and for having eaten the cake. There are some who thought it was a joke and some who asked for the recipe which I copied and gave to them. Thanks again. Have a great day.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Okay, now we are talking.... Can I have the recipe? Can you send it over with a man? LOL Just kidding, I have my own candy man. I heard of this cake but I never tried it. I have had a cake that is delicious too, it is called 'chocolate decadence' lol and it IS decadent. I love chocolate but I can't have it now. woe me. Good job!

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing and glad to pass 0n the recipe. No men to pass on. Swore off those long ago,,,lol

    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package German chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 30-May-2016
    Thank you! I am a chocoholic. I can't have too much now but I do splurge once in a while. :)

    No worries about the man. I got one now. But I lived on my own for 9 years and didn't miss a man at all. I had not planned to meet my boyfriend and he is a blessing, my little miracle. I'll bake 'better than sex cake' I bet he likes it, he is pretty fond of sex. LOL
Comment from JennC
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Hahaha! I've made "Better Than Sex Cake" before. It's delicious! Cute poem. Nice job complying with the required syllable count. Well done! Good luck!

 Comment Written 30-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thanks for your review. I have found many that think this was a joke. Glad to find someone who has actually made the cake.
Comment from victor 66
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Is there really anyone that doesn't have a sweet tooth? Heath Bars have always been one of my favorites since childhood. Best wishes in the Candy 5 - 6 - 5 contest.

 Comment Written 29-May-2016


reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    Thanks for reviewing and I really do have a recipe for 'Better Than Sex Cake'.
reply by victor 66 on 29-May-2016
    You are most welcome. And I certainly would be interested in your recipe, if you're so inclined to share it.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package German chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your picture plus your words are great together. I know the recipe of which you write. It is great.

You did a great job with the prompt. Good job with the syllable count.

Best wishes in the contest.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    You are the first one that knows what I was talking about in the poem. Thanks for your review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Nice rhyme in your 5-6-5 poem. Who makes up these ridiculous forms?

I thought Heath was a typo for Health when I first saw it, but there's nothing healthy looking about that cake. Strong last line, although you might want to look at punctuation to avoid readers wondering what a 'sex cake' is.

Steve

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Stephanie Kastner
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I want a piece of that cake! All these candy poems are making me want some chocolate. The photo you chose is perfect for the poem. Your poem flows nicely!

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
    BETTER THAN SEX CAKE

    1 package German chocolate cake mix
    1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
    1 can sweetened condensed milk
    Cool whip
    Heath Toffee Bars

    Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.