To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "The Best"Poems by Michael
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, your poem is very well written...always in your our own unique words...love your picture...and once again Bruce Springsteen...he has an awesome voice...well done..love you Linda xxoo
bad headache...can't even sleept away...tomorrow..xxoo
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi Michael, your poem is very well written...always in your our own unique words...love your picture...and once again Bruce Springsteen...he has an awesome voice...well done..love you Linda xxoo
bad headache...can't even sleept away...tomorrow..xxoo
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Hi...-smile-
well I'm sorry to hear that...bufferin should have a special place in every household in my recent opinion. yea Bruce did this one with a twang. Appreciate you coloring me gold. love you too Michael
Comment from Nika2016
Here is another one up for interpretation so I will just go with what I feel from it...
He seems to feel victorious in his challenge against another male? But in his victory he must show compassion (cowboy honor) because she failed to protect by default...thinking the man did not need her protection...I know ..rambling..smile..He seeks to capture her..la vie d'une rose...by showing her he is "still in the saddle"...after all this time...Bruce sings country? Wow...a long time since I have listened...The style and rhymes are as good as ever...Hopefully, I did not destroy the intended meaning...
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Here is another one up for interpretation so I will just go with what I feel from it...
He seems to feel victorious in his challenge against another male? But in his victory he must show compassion (cowboy honor) because she failed to protect by default...thinking the man did not need her protection...I know ..rambling..smile..He seeks to capture her..la vie d'une rose...by showing her he is "still in the saddle"...after all this time...Bruce sings country? Wow...a long time since I have listened...The style and rhymes are as good as ever...Hopefully, I did not destroy the intended meaning...
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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well....its apparent you weren't blessed with the gift of interpretation...but you got the tongue talking down pat. Nope...way off once again....maybe next time...good luck Michael
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Ok...sorry...its just so..ambiguous...
I will stop trying...
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yea right-
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Right..no reason to annoy you with my interpretations...I have others to annoy...smile
It's just that sometimes I have this aha moment and then you say..sorry..not what I am
thinking..go away...so I will...bye
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Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Reconciled. I LOVE cowboy poetry. In my opinion there should be lots more of it!
The only true criticism I have is (I find out as I read it all the way through) a typo in
Line 1. But I see in the last line "than" and on the album "than"--so we're good.
Easy change. I do particularly like the cowboy vernacular--esp. like the "rode-hard" lines. About 4 mos. ago I found my new favorite author: Cormac McCarthy, but when I got through (just barely) the story of the she-wolf, I haven't been able to pick up another book of his. But back to your work--keep it up! It's terrific and we need it to balance out the site. GoodHearted Woman (Waylon & Willie & The Boys) LOL
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Reconciled. I LOVE cowboy poetry. In my opinion there should be lots more of it!
The only true criticism I have is (I find out as I read it all the way through) a typo in
Line 1. But I see in the last line "than" and on the album "than"--so we're good.
Easy change. I do particularly like the cowboy vernacular--esp. like the "rode-hard" lines. About 4 mos. ago I found my new favorite author: Cormac McCarthy, but when I got through (just barely) the story of the she-wolf, I haven't been able to pick up another book of his. But back to your work--keep it up! It's terrific and we need it to balance out the site. GoodHearted Woman (Waylon & Willie & The Boys) LOL
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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well let me change it before somebody calls Bruce uneducated.
Hey Goodheartedwoman...-smile- I cant tell you how long I've been waiting for you....ahaha...I'm not kidding. hm...well I'm more into cowgirls but I'll check him out. appreciate you Dear...now let me bring your things in...love Michael
Comment from MizKat
Hi Michael,
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job in writing it. Some of your poetry I don't understand so I don't know how to write things for it. Besides that I'm getting very forgetful. Such is life for this old lady. LOL You'll realize what I mean when you get in your seventies.
Love you, Mom Kat
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Hi Michael,
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You did a great job in writing it. Some of your poetry I don't understand so I don't know how to write things for it. Besides that I'm getting very forgetful. Such is life for this old lady. LOL You'll realize what I mean when you get in your seventies.
Love you, Mom Kat
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Oh Momma I swear to God sometines I wonder if I havent been around since the beginning of time...I forget how old I am. thats why I'm always so grateful its listed on my profile page....-smile-...thank you Sweet....love you too. Michael
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So how old are you? I know many years younger than me. LOL I'd look at your profile page if I could remember how, but like I said I'm getting forgetful. LOL Love back again. Mom
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I think I'm 54 but I always 39 to make me feel better...its all the mind Mom...-smile-
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Oh you are so cute in what you say. (sorry if men don't like the word cute) I couldn't think of a better word to use. LOL
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well you're my Mother...so its okay.
usually though if a girl says that to ya it means their not interested. So we usually shoot for rugged beast magnetism...lol
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Good morning dear Son,
LOL Thanks for the laugh at the start of a new day. I really appreciate it as being able able to laugh makes me feel so much better!
Mom
