Baby Horton Hears Who
This is about waiting for the baby to be born.31 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done with this entry in this "you're having a grandchild" contest, the verse is Dr Seuss like. I love the repetitive first line of each verse, it adds to the general impact of the poem, I write a poem for each birthday of my wife, children and grandchildren, so I like the idea of this contest. Written beautifully in articulate language and aabb rhyming. well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Well done with this entry in this "you're having a grandchild" contest, the verse is Dr Seuss like. I love the repetitive first line of each verse, it adds to the general impact of the poem, I write a poem for each birthday of my wife, children and grandchildren, so I like the idea of this contest. Written beautifully in articulate language and aabb rhyming. well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thank you for your thorough and positive review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gone but not forgotten
The poem was sweet and the writing prompt was informational and, frankly, inspirational. Your words are sincerely appreciated...I hope your grandkids are nearby.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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The poem was sweet and the writing prompt was informational and, frankly, inspirational. Your words are sincerely appreciated...I hope your grandkids are nearby.
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review and I wish they were close by but unfortunately not.
Comment from smel
This poem was so awesome! I loved the meaning behind it. Your poem covered a beautiful topic in a creative way. I have just recently found a new love of Dr. Seuss, and I couldn't help but smile while reading "Baby Horton Hears Who". Great job.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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This poem was so awesome! I loved the meaning behind it. Your poem covered a beautiful topic in a creative way. I have just recently found a new love of Dr. Seuss, and I couldn't help but smile while reading "Baby Horton Hears Who". Great job.
Comment Written 30-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from mvbrooks
I love Dr. Seuss so I was drawn to your poem. Knowing it was written for a specific child made it more heart-warming. The consistent rhyme, line count, and similar format of each stanza is strong.
A thought--why not capitalize the first word of each second line? Since the first line ends in a question mark, the second line starts a new "sentence" and the capitalization of that line, followed by lower case lines 3 and 4 would more closely indicate that lines 3, 4 and 5 are interconnected.
Congratulations on this great event in your family.
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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I love Dr. Seuss so I was drawn to your poem. Knowing it was written for a specific child made it more heart-warming. The consistent rhyme, line count, and similar format of each stanza is strong.
A thought--why not capitalize the first word of each second line? Since the first line ends in a question mark, the second line starts a new "sentence" and the capitalization of that line, followed by lower case lines 3 and 4 would more closely indicate that lines 3, 4 and 5 are interconnected.
Congratulations on this great event in your family.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 30-May-2016
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Thank you for your suggestion. I had it capitalized and changed it to give more flow but I'll look at it again. Thanks for the review and the suggestion.
Comment from Misty Dawn
The adorable picture this poem paints I love. I have a great admiration for Dr. Seuss so I could be easily partial to anything inspired by his work. I have no complaints!
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reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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The adorable picture this poem paints I love. I have a great admiration for Dr. Seuss so I could be easily partial to anything inspired by his work. I have no complaints!
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Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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thank you
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Your welcome
Comment from An Awakened Heart
Simply Amazing. I love the adventure you described, as I followed along my imagination's flowing.
You brought back memories of my children.
Very eloquent in its simplicity but complex in the meaning.
I love to the flow and the depht of this wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Simply Amazing. I love the adventure you described, as I followed along my imagination's flowing.
You brought back memories of my children.
Very eloquent in its simplicity but complex in the meaning.
I love to the flow and the depht of this wonderful poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review and thank you also for the extra star.
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Very clever to use the name Horton- is this your first grandchild? I am in that club -I have 3 babies now -and it is so wonderful. Congratulations Nana!
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Very clever to use the name Horton- is this your first grandchild? I am in that club -I have 3 babies now -and it is so wonderful. Congratulations Nana!
Comment Written 29-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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He is the first Horton but not the first grandchild. Thank you for your positive review.
Comment from sage17611
Your poem most certainly describes everyone's anticipation for the arrival of the new baby. Grand kids are a joy, and seeing your children with raising their children is a blessing. Your poem is well written with a nice flow, and the rhyming is quite smooth. This is an enjoyable read, good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Your poem most certainly describes everyone's anticipation for the arrival of the new baby. Grand kids are a joy, and seeing your children with raising their children is a blessing. Your poem is well written with a nice flow, and the rhyming is quite smooth. This is an enjoyable read, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from heyjude
mystery author, I enjoyed reading this. I like this from the baby's
view point of hearing his mom's voice and her heartbeat being his
lullaby. Also, daddy's voice making baby jump for joy.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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mystery author, I enjoyed reading this. I like this from the baby's
view point of hearing his mom's voice and her heartbeat being his
lullaby. Also, daddy's voice making baby jump for joy.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you for your keen observations.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
When I saw baby Horton, I conjured up a Dr. Seuss book, then after the read saw the reference in your notes. This is quite lovely and I enjoyed your author's notes as much as the poem. So true!
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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When I saw baby Horton, I conjured up a Dr. Seuss book, then after the read saw the reference in your notes. This is quite lovely and I enjoyed your author's notes as much as the poem. So true!
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Thank you for such a nice review.
