Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "God World"Dawn of Chaos
6 total reviews
Comment from Swampfox1
I like it. To me, and correct me if I am wrong, but it sounds like notes, notations on events taking place or of observance of happenings. One has to read it several times for it to sink in. I would enjoy it better if it had a continuous flow, but then maybe not. I do detect a shroud of doubt, perhaps a bit of anger.
Good job. I would give more stars if it were not so hard to read and comprehend, but maybe that is how you intended it to be.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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I like it. To me, and correct me if I am wrong, but it sounds like notes, notations on events taking place or of observance of happenings. One has to read it several times for it to sink in. I would enjoy it better if it had a continuous flow, but then maybe not. I do detect a shroud of doubt, perhaps a bit of anger.
Good job. I would give more stars if it were not so hard to read and comprehend, but maybe that is how you intended it to be.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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No need your response I do receive periodically from reviews. Such remarks encouraging me to do revision to combat acclaims to improve my work. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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no problem
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about immortality, Son of God, of God's world, he did his duties to God and has shown us everything so easy; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This speaks about immortality, Son of God, of God's world, he did his duties to God and has shown us everything so easy; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Glad certain features in this write was found appealing seeming to charge a little your spirit. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, you certainly have a unique style, but in some places the meaning eluded me. But, that's not the writer's problem, it's the readers. I enjoyed your thoughtful word choices and the picture compliments the poem. I have no suggestions for making this better, thaks for sharing it, Ana
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hello, you certainly have a unique style, but in some places the meaning eluded me. But, that's not the writer's problem, it's the readers. I enjoyed your thoughtful word choices and the picture compliments the poem. I have no suggestions for making this better, thaks for sharing it, Ana
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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The question address by this write is who understands its message. Most will not comprehend its statement, but others will and hate its declaration. A test of spirit to speak. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Beverly Botelho
Your writing exhibits an understanding of a variety of disciplines: religion, science, philosophy. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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Your writing exhibits an understanding of a variety of disciplines: religion, science, philosophy. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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You have strong inspiring words of encouragement: touching in appeal. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
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You do demonstrate a breadth of knowledge. Keep sharing.
Comment from foxangie123
You are such a unique and talented author. The person sketching the pictures is so very wonderful as well. Very intellectual penning.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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You are such a unique and talented author. The person sketching the pictures is so very wonderful as well. Very intellectual penning.
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Glad someone has that view, I don't: creative ideals, bad speech. WIP. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed captivating considerations.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
When reviewing poems or stories, I always select what theme it represents. Yours, this piece, contain a theme that is eternal as the subject is about GOD. And I am amazed that a chapter of a story is contain in a few words and with a poetical sense.
And to think that the message is completely expressed in this very short chapter then the writer must be someone so unique, intelligent and guided by GOD Himself.
I love GOD and I will always appreciate whatever written in His sake. It is one way of spreading His words and making Him be recognized and known to others who may not know Him yet.
I am a Catholic from the Philippines and I am trying to find my ways toward Him. Write-up of this kind helps me more in searching Him and His glory.
Amen.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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When reviewing poems or stories, I always select what theme it represents. Yours, this piece, contain a theme that is eternal as the subject is about GOD. And I am amazed that a chapter of a story is contain in a few words and with a poetical sense.
And to think that the message is completely expressed in this very short chapter then the writer must be someone so unique, intelligent and guided by GOD Himself.
I love GOD and I will always appreciate whatever written in His sake. It is one way of spreading His words and making Him be recognized and known to others who may not know Him yet.
I am a Catholic from the Philippines and I am trying to find my ways toward Him. Write-up of this kind helps me more in searching Him and His glory.
Amen.
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Know one thing Jesus, our Lord, said we were gods: why seek that which you are? The tree is divided good and evil: who are you? Thanking you for warm touching thoughts. Jesus states the books will be gathered: we will know man.
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Thank you so much for the explanation. I appreciate it too.
God Bless!