Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "Amen"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Seems you have deep frustrations, or the character in this poem awakens in fear and loneliness. Verses flow detailing with literary devices that portray deep thoughts within this character or poet. Very interesting! Good luck! liberty justice
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Seems you have deep frustrations, or the character in this poem awakens in fear and loneliness. Verses flow detailing with literary devices that portray deep thoughts within this character or poet. Very interesting! Good luck! liberty justice
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Got hit in the head. Life in a blur. Glad some of this write aspects were pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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So sorry! Did you really get
hit in the head? liberty justice
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
TPAC Wonderful piece of writing with a imagery of what it could like compared to what it is like. How awesome it If mankind could to conscienceness of living in peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing your view your beliefs and so be it. Amen amen amen and amen
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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TPAC Wonderful piece of writing with a imagery of what it could like compared to what it is like. How awesome it If mankind could to conscienceness of living in peace and harmony. Thank you for sharing your view your beliefs and so be it. Amen amen amen and amen
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Wishful hopes that seem unobtainable by man, yet a must I feel for overall existence. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the dilemma of being bruised right, left and centre in a world that has the potential of being good in its totality.
The work highlights the protagonist's fear laden life lived in loneliness, his uncertainty of how it will all end and how careful measures could right all the wrong and make the world s better place.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery and simile.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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The work reminisces the dilemma of being bruised right, left and centre in a world that has the potential of being good in its totality.
The work highlights the protagonist's fear laden life lived in loneliness, his uncertainty of how it will all end and how careful measures could right all the wrong and make the world s better place.
The work earns its texture through the use of imagery and simile.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Glad aspects of this write was found pleasing to you. Great response about its write defining features. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Beverly Botelho
You have an ear for poetry and and eye for image. You are able to capture your meaning clearly, succinctly and in a poetic way. Perfect.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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You have an ear for poetry and and eye for image. You are able to capture your meaning clearly, succinctly and in a poetic way. Perfect.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2016
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Not always so, thanks to friends at FS, I have a better start to those features you praise me with. Thanking you for generous rate and touching sentiments.
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I meant every word of my review. You are always writing, and with every piece I see improvement.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I seriously doubt it, TPAC, but you've expressed your thoughts and wishes quite eloquently here.
If only...
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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I seriously doubt it, TPAC, but you've expressed your thoughts and wishes quite eloquently here.
If only...
Comment Written 27-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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My grandmother called me "a little red devil", rolling off roof was not seen good playing cowboys. Fiqure after the three time someone would have learnt. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
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You are more than welcome, TPAC.
~Dean :}
Comment from foxangie123
This is such an exceptional piece of writing here. Wow it is so very true and I love how you use always instead of eternity although the same. Mist clever indeed.
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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This is such an exceptional piece of writing here. Wow it is so very true and I love how you use always instead of eternity although the same. Mist clever indeed.
Comment Written 26-May-2016
reply by the author on 29-May-2016
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Such views make one head big, can't fit through window pane. Hurts. Still, joyful to be said appreciated: as I do you. Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging inspiratio n.
