Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

A very sad, but, a very real happening today...everyone donates their organs now and the families are so relieved to have their lost, loved ones, continue after death. I like this very much. It's sad, but, very true and hits on the emotions of the reader. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 25-May-2016

Yes, Jason was and still will ...
"Always be in My Heart and...
'Each day passes and as I speak of Him...
"Another is touched...
Ricky

Comment from maryvellef

Good

What a very kind boy he was! To have given something of himself to save them. Sorry to hear about his dying of a very tender age. Very original way of presenting this interesting poem. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 23-May-2016

Thanks,
Ricky 1024.

Comment from wiserwoman

Average

I find myself really wanting to know more of what this is about. Perhaps that is the mark of a good poem. This would be such a better exercise if we were all sitting around a room.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

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reply by the author on 23-May-2016

Thanks,
Ricky 1024.