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Best Friends Till the End

100 word story

41 total reviews 
Comment from CivilChick
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I can only hope to spend my last hours on earth with my fury best friends if I am the only human left in my family. Dogs sometimes run off to die alone, and I found it interesting that the man in this story wanted to do the same.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Thank you for your kind response to my flash story, civilchick. I appreciate your your taking the time to read and share your comments. Please forgive the delay in my reply to your review.
    Thanks!
    Smiles,
    Indy :-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Ah geez, you didn't need the photo anyway - this is so touching! Yep, a good friend - the best - and comfort for a dying man. What a marvelous entry for this contest. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Thank you for your kind response to my flash story, Dawn. I appreciate your your taking the time to read and share your comments. Please forgive the delay in my reply to your review.
    Thanks!
    Smiles,
    Indy :-)
reply by Dawn Munro on 26-May-2016
    No worries - it was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What an exceptional story about how those who feel they want to die and need the comfort of their best friend. I lost my best friend almost three years ago. She was killed in a road that she never went into.

My heart is still broken because "Little Girl" was like my child. We spent many hours taking walks without her on a leash. She was that good. She was so smart and we would play and watched TV together and she slept with me.

I wish you great luck in this contest. Thank you for writing this and the great memories it gave me.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Jim, please forgive the long delay in responding to your awesome review for my flash story. Thank you so much for your generous rating, kind words, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed the emotion of the story. Thanks for sharing your touching memory of your Little Girl. I know how much it hurts to lose someone such a part of our family and lives. T makes me happy the story brought you some good memories.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from William Ross
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very good that was nice of Rose to bring his best friend his loving dog in with him. Great write on this short piece, good luck and have a great day

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Thank you for your kind response to my flash story, Bill. I appreciate your your taking the time to read and share your comments. Please forgive the delay in my reply to your review.
    Thanks!
    Smiles,
    Indy :-)
Comment from LIJ Red
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Aggravating, to have to convert a big beautiful TIFF file to a jpeg that
comes up sort of fuzzy in the best of sizes...As an old goat living alone with his dead wife's chihuahua, I like this flash...

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    I don't know how to convert photos to jpeg, so I guess that's my problem. Never had trouble using photos before, but the last few weeks, th site won't accept them.

    Thank you for your review, LIJ Red, and I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks!
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
reply by LIJ Red on 20-May-2016
    I open the tif files in Paint, then save them as jpg.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Excellent
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Being a dog lover, I found this to be a sad yet beautiful 100 word story, but now you leave me wondering what will happen to Frankie when his master passes! I know, I'm a hopeless sap for dogs! Well done.

 Comment Written 20-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    Thank you for your wonderful review and comments for my story, Mary. In my first draft, I had the nurse call Harold's son to bring the dog, but he got cut during editing to dlete words to meet the word limit. I appreciate your kind words ... I'm a mush for dogs, too.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from MissMerri
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This is a six-star story, of course, and I am furious with myself for running out of stars and for not seeing this in time to vote for it. I hate that! I truly loved the story and thought it was so well-written, and so touching. What a great nurse Rosie was. And what a great story-teller you are, Karyn. Exceptional writing. I'm glad you placed in the top three anyway, but so sorry my vote was missing. ;*{

 Comment Written 19-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    What a wonderful review for my flash story, MIssMerri! Thank you for your kind words, but please don't ever be angry with yourself for not voting. I'm so pleased you a joyed the story, and your reviews are worth more than contest votes to me.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Wonderful story, Karyn. It's nice when doggies are let into care homes. I think pets should be and many of them do.

A delightful story from start to finish.

Well done, you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    Thanks for your kind review and comments for my story, Gloria. I think more and more care and rehab centers are allowing pets to visit because they realize how much better the patients do. Th hospital I worked in would allow visits from pets , and there is an organization in my community that bring mostly dogs to hospitals, nursing homes, and rehab centers.
    I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)
Comment from foxangie123
Excellent
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Hands down unbeatable best ever most stunning pieces of work. This is spectacular and exceptional that deserves stars of six I'm out of. Wow-ah what a heart throb. Amazing talent here.

 Comment Written 19-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    Thanks for your review and comments for my story. Glad you enjoyed.
    Smiles,
    Indy :-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
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That was nice of the nurse to bring the old guy's dog to him so he could die with company. Good hundred word story.

Teresa

 Comment Written 19-May-2016


reply by the author on 20-May-2016
    Thanks for your kind review and comments for my story, Teresa. I'm delighted you enjoyed it.
    Smiles,
    Karyn :-)