Never Too Old
A tragic farm story.30 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Well, I'm pleased to learn that nothing has happened so far. It's scary to think what can happen when it's your loved one and they persists to do what they want. Good entry. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Well, I'm pleased to learn that nothing has happened so far. It's scary to think what can happen when it's your loved one and they persists to do what they want. Good entry. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. One hates to give up doing the things they love.
Comment from C.J. 16
A tragic farm story indeed. It is very difficult for older people to stop doing what they love to do.
Very interesting and well-written. I look forward to reading more of your work. All the best.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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A tragic farm story indeed. It is very difficult for older people to stop doing what they love to do.
Very interesting and well-written. I look forward to reading more of your work. All the best.
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. You must be a new member. I don't recall your handle.
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You're welcome. I joined FS in February. Have a nice weekend.
Linda
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You're welcome. I joined FS in February. Have a nice weekend.
Linda
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You're welcome. I joined FS in February. Have a nice weekend.
Linda
Comment from Toneyear
LOL, I know the type. My father is one of those men. But, I have to realize that my dad it an 'outside' man. He needs to be outside with something to do or he will wither up and die sooner then his time is suppose to be. That is one reason that he and my mom work with salvage. He had a stroke among other things many years ago and can't get around to do a lot, now. But I thank God that he found something to do, to keep him here a little longer, as not all of his kids are living for the Lord yet. Thank you for sharing. Tina
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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LOL, I know the type. My father is one of those men. But, I have to realize that my dad it an 'outside' man. He needs to be outside with something to do or he will wither up and die sooner then his time is suppose to be. That is one reason that he and my mom work with salvage. He had a stroke among other things many years ago and can't get around to do a lot, now. But I thank God that he found something to do, to keep him here a little longer, as not all of his kids are living for the Lord yet. Thank you for sharing. Tina
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. I wish my husband could get around enough to do some of the outdoor things he loves. He got hurt by a bull three years ago and now sits in the house all day. I feel so sorry for him.
Comment from dbmccarter
Yes a tragic accident but a lesson too. At 86 years old it is a blessing to die doing something you love. At least you don't have to worry about this actually happening.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Yes a tragic accident but a lesson too. At 86 years old it is a blessing to die doing something you love. At least you don't have to worry about this actually happening.
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. My 94- year- old uncle just passed away 2 weeks ago. He mowed the lawn the day before he died. He also drove his car yet and lived alone by his choice. I hope to do the same in my old age.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Well done in keeping with the under 100 requirement. You have told a story that is relate-able, both as the subject of your story, and as his wife and kids owning the concern for his well being.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Well done in keeping with the under 100 requirement. You have told a story that is relate-able, both as the subject of your story, and as his wife and kids owning the concern for his well being.
Comment Written 21-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. It is difficult to tell a complete story in so few words. I love the challenge.
Comment from DonandVicki
Sometimes your pride can get you in a lot of trouble. I like your story and is a tale that I can relate to. A nice short read that kept my attention.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Sometimes your pride can get you in a lot of trouble. I like your story and is a tale that I can relate to. A nice short read that kept my attention.
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. I love to do these short stories. It is a challenge to tell a story in so few words.
Comment from lancellot
It is a sad short story. No one wants to see a loved one die, but if you have to go, then I think dying doing what you love the most is the way. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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It is a sad short story. No one wants to see a loved one die, but if you have to go, then I think dying doing what you love the most is the way. Well done.
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. Farmers often die in tractor- related accidents. Tractors are not forgiving of errors.
Comment from CivilChick
I am so glad your husband quit driving tractors before your nightmare came true. I have a husband who loves tractors as well, and I imagine he will stay on them as long as he can as well.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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I am so glad your husband quit driving tractors before your nightmare came true. I have a husband who loves tractors as well, and I imagine he will stay on them as long as he can as well.
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. I hope your husband can continue driving his tractor for many years.
Comment from enitsalemap
I had an old uncle on a farm in PA who died just this way, doing what he loved. I love the flash fiction format and this was good. It told the story in such a true and straightforward way. Good Job.
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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I had an old uncle on a farm in PA who died just this way, doing what he loved. I love the flash fiction format and this was good. It told the story in such a true and straightforward way. Good Job.
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 21-May-2016
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Thank you. Farmers are often killed by farm machinery. Tractors are very un-forgiving of errors.
Comment from Harv
The ending says alot about life what else would you want to die doing but what you love twist of fate and intriguing conclusion. Well done on the prize
reply by the author on 20-May-2016
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The ending says alot about life what else would you want to die doing but what you love twist of fate and intriguing conclusion. Well done on the prize
Comment Written 20-May-2016
reply by the author on 20-May-2016
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Thank you. Farmers are often killed or injured in tractor accidents. Tractors are not forgiving of errors.
