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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "I Am"Poems and Essays
17 total reviews
Comment from Bryana
Your very short poem of three lines
shows that we don't need so many
words to say how we feel about God.
Your poem is lovely my friend.
I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
Your very short poem of three lines
shows that we don't need so many
words to say how we feel about God.
Your poem is lovely my friend.
I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 19-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Thank you friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from Pantygynt
Simple faith is to be admired. I don't have it but I admire the people who do. Obviously from this piece of writing, from thesae six syllables it is quitre clear that you are one of those people who do. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
Simple faith is to be admired. I don't have it but I admire the people who do. Obviously from this piece of writing, from thesae six syllables it is quitre clear that you are one of those people who do. Congratulations.
Comment Written 19-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Thank you my friend. Teri
Comment from foxangie123
Another most gifted and beautiful poems. You could not of said it better. Wow what a testament and lovely mind and soul you have. Way to go.
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
Another most gifted and beautiful poems. You could not of said it better. Wow what a testament and lovely mind and soul you have. Way to go.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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Thank you my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, He is always our God, and so lucky for us. Most all of us falling short many times throughout the year of being the children of God that we are suppose to be. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
Yes, He is always our God, and so lucky for us. Most all of us falling short many times throughout the year of being the children of God that we are suppose to be. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 26-May-2016
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So true Ric. Teri
Comment from Lisa Deverick
I just entered this contest myself and it is not as easy as I thought it to be. To get a message out in 8 small syllables- but you have done it well.
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
I just entered this contest myself and it is not as easy as I thought it to be. To get a message out in 8 small syllables- but you have done it well.
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you for the great review. Teri
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A short and sweet powerful message. That is all we really need to know and believe. He said it many times that He will be our God
always
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
A short and sweet powerful message. That is all we really need to know and believe. He said it many times that He will be our God
always
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from damommy
Absolutely.
Your poems always inspire me. It doesn't hurt to be reminded of what path we should be taking.
Thank you for sharing with me. The photo is perfect. 8-)
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
Absolutely.
Your poems always inspire me. It doesn't hurt to be reminded of what path we should be taking.
Thank you for sharing with me. The photo is perfect. 8-)
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you my friend. I try to write things that truly inspire me as well. hugs, Teri
Comment from heyjude
Teri, what a good poem for the 2-4-2 contest. Yes, He is
the great I AM who is always there for us to lean on.
Good luck in this contest. This is short, but right to the
point of what we believe.
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
Teri, what a good poem for the 2-4-2 contest. Yes, He is
the great I AM who is always there for us to lean on.
Good luck in this contest. This is short, but right to the
point of what we believe.
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you for the great review. hugs, Teri
Comment from Unspoken94
I think we need to listen more in our prayer time
or we will miss the constancy of God's message.
This piece of yours validates that. An excellent
message, Teri. -Bill
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
I think we need to listen more in our prayer time
or we will miss the constancy of God's message.
This piece of yours validates that. An excellent
message, Teri. -Bill
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you Bill. It takes a lot of prayer time, reading His word and faith. At least that is where I am coming from. hugs , Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
Teri,
Wow, this is a very powerful 2-4-2 entry poem!
Your faith and talent as a poet shines through
this brightly.
You could even capitalize I Am since that is also
what He calls himself.
Just beautiful,
Linda
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
Teri,
Wow, this is a very powerful 2-4-2 entry poem!
Your faith and talent as a poet shines through
this brightly.
You could even capitalize I Am since that is also
what He calls himself.
Just beautiful,
Linda
Comment Written 17-May-2016
reply by the author on 17-May-2016
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Thank you so much for the great review. I did capitalize the title but I will do back and make sure about the rest. hugs, Teri