Strike three, you're out.
Sorry may have gotten him an extra inning.6 total reviews
Comment from foxangie123
This is a most excellent and brilliant poem as entry to this contest or by itself. It is clever and the baseball picture is very effective as well. Excellent.
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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This is a most excellent and brilliant poem as entry to this contest or by itself. It is clever and the baseball picture is very effective as well. Excellent.
Comment Written 15-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-May-2016
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Thanks for the review. Sorry for the late reply.
Comment from DonandVicki
I get more of the idea this is much more than just about sports. I get the feeling of someone who has had several strikes against him or her and the third is unacceptable.
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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I get more of the idea this is much more than just about sports. I get the feeling of someone who has had several strikes against him or her and the third is unacceptable.
Comment Written 13-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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Correct. It is not about sports that was just a metaphor. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from tfawcus
Interesting. I don't know much about this game but I do know that across the board more and more players in games of all sorts seem to think that it is OK to dispute the umpire's or referee's decision - and they do so belligerently and with bad grace. A poor example to young fans and bad sportsmanship.
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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Interesting. I don't know much about this game but I do know that across the board more and more players in games of all sorts seem to think that it is OK to dispute the umpire's or referee's decision - and they do so belligerently and with bad grace. A poor example to young fans and bad sportsmanship.
Comment Written 13-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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Thanks, Tony. The artwork just kind of played into the metaphor.
Comment from Gloria ....
Author, this is a fine, fine minute poem. I love every word of it, and your smooth flow of words in iambic meter is perfect.
Love all three verses of an extremely well written minute poem and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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Author, this is a fine, fine minute poem. I love every word of it, and your smooth flow of words in iambic meter is perfect.
Love all three verses of an extremely well written minute poem and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-May-2016
reply by the author on 14-May-2016
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Thank you for the great review and the well wishes.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*<*)
= You've written a good Minute poem entry.
= Complementary picture to add impact to your writing.
= Good luck in the contest.
=::= A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! =::=
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
=::= Feel free to visit my profile on Amazon.com =::=
amazon.com/author/jacquelinefranklin
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Hi (*<*)
= You've written a good Minute poem entry.
= Complementary picture to add impact to your writing.
= Good luck in the contest.
=::= A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! =::=
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
=::= Feel free to visit my profile on Amazon.com =::=
amazon.com/author/jacquelinefranklin
Comment Written 13-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Wow! So now I see that the 8,4,4,4, looks like. You've done a beautiful job here.
I read about it this morning, but it helps to see it actually done and to read how easily it flows. I love perfect iambic anyway. This was a delight!
GoodHearted Woman
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Wow! So now I see that the 8,4,4,4, looks like. You've done a beautiful job here.
I read about it this morning, but it helps to see it actually done and to read how easily it flows. I love perfect iambic anyway. This was a delight!
GoodHearted Woman
Comment Written 13-May-2016
reply by the author on 13-May-2016
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Thanks for the kind review and welcome to Fanstory.
