Comment from MAMGALAM

Excellent

The soul retreating without finding the mystery of intimacy....
Wonderful imagination ..!
The title...the artwork and those lines..make the poem beautifully different ...!
Great...congrats ..!!

 Comment Written 15-May-2016

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reply by the author on 17-May-2016

Thank you so much MAMGALAM!

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

This was beautiful, insightful and so well written. Sometimes when using rhymes the intensity of the poem can be lost. Not so here. I too often have emotions surface at night that vacate in the morning's light. Great work!

 Comment Written 15-May-2016

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reply by the author on 17-May-2016

Thank you so much johnwilson!

Comment from foxangie123

Average

The title is wonderful and it brought back childhood memories. The picture of the Owls is so well done as well. I'm unable to read your poem because the font is way too small. I will adjust your score if you make it readable.

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 11-May-2016

Hi foxangie, I raised the font to 22. I am hoping you can read it now. Please let me know. Thank you, playin'

Comment from Jonadab Ezerie

Excellent

The artwork you choose to go with your poem is awesome. It is perfect for your poem
Your words I'm sure many can relate

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 11-May-2016

thanks sealord