Clime For Climbers
a 5-7-512 total reviews
Comment from Taffspride
A very good entry for the contest and an excellent play on words. A clime for climbers. Love it
Wishing you every good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
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reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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A very good entry for the contest and an excellent play on words. A clime for climbers. Love it
Wishing you every good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 10-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous.
A Pretty good poem about climbers for your 5/7/5 contest entry. The presentation is very attractive and your syllable count is perfect. Good job.
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Hello, anonymous.
A Pretty good poem about climbers for your 5/7/5 contest entry. The presentation is very attractive and your syllable count is perfect. Good job.
Comment Written 09-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Lovely entry into this 5-7-5 contest. Wish you best of luck. A lot of great contenders for the best here. Reading them all and enjoying it very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
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Lovely entry into this 5-7-5 contest. Wish you best of luck. A lot of great contenders for the best here. Reading them all and enjoying it very much. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 09-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from foxangie123
I'm not sure yet did you mean climb versus clime as I have not heard of the one ending in e which means nothing. A great contest entry indeed. Bravo.
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I'm not sure yet did you mean climb versus clime as I have not heard of the one ending in e which means nothing. A great contest entry indeed. Bravo.
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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The word clime is a variation on climate. It usually appears in poetry. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A well-written 5-7-5 poem, climbers of high mountains are brave and strong their ultimate goal is to reach the summit and to experience the climate differences.
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A well-written 5-7-5 poem, climbers of high mountains are brave and strong their ultimate goal is to reach the summit and to experience the climate differences.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jonathan1
A really good piece that capitalises on the format. Says a lot for so few words. I love the contrast chill - warm. A pleasure to read
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A really good piece that capitalises on the format. Says a lot for so few words. I love the contrast chill - warm. A pleasure to read
Comment Written 09-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from YoungRiter42
A good 5-7-5- poem. I counted and you made the syllable count. I assume that you enjoy climbing mountains because it was a good poem about that. I liked the cold mountain chill line.
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reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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A good 5-7-5- poem. I counted and you made the syllable count. I assume that you enjoy climbing mountains because it was a good poem about that. I liked the cold mountain chill line.
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Comment Written 08-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tony bronk
I don't think that I ever saw the word "clime" before until now. To me it looks like an error, but probably isn't. Good poem anyway. Tony bronk
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I don't think that I ever saw the word "clime" before until now. To me it looks like an error, but probably isn't. Good poem anyway. Tony bronk
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Thank you for reviewing. Clime is short for climate and is usually seen as a poetic reference to weather.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Good play on the words "climb" and "clime".
Your syllable count is perfect.
The picture you have chosen to accentuate and compliment the rather uplifting message of your poem seems quite fitting.
Well done.
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Good play on the words "climb" and "clime".
Your syllable count is perfect.
The picture you have chosen to accentuate and compliment the rather uplifting message of your poem seems quite fitting.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest
exact syllables ate 5-7-5
Excellent imagery in the mountain and climbers
Good use of alliteration
nice contrast of the mountain chill and the warmers plains
Excellent picture to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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This is a fine entry for the contest
exact syllables ate 5-7-5
Excellent imagery in the mountain and climbers
Good use of alliteration
nice contrast of the mountain chill and the warmers plains
Excellent picture to match poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.