Comment from maryvellef

Good

Very warm poem. You could easily bring to mind the image of a sunny garden with the butterflies flitting and ladybirds hopping and pecking the ground. I would have preferred another choice of words in the third line to be more fluid though. Still, it gives a warm image. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Neat rhyme with 'lures' and 'treasures'. A nice, bright piece for a nice, bright day. Syllable count all correct, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

nicely done in that format. This went with the picture extremely well. It makes me want to run outside and smell the air. Thank you for waking up my senses this morning.

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 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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Thank you