Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Congratulations on tying for first.

I agree that buterflires and ladybugs are sweet treasures. I have always liked them.
I am still waiting for it to stay Spring so I can see them.

Keep writing

dp

 Comment Written 15-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Thank you for your review

reply by dragonpoet on 15-May-2016

Any time.

dp

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

Just as my personal preference, I would like to see this as a haiku, seeing it is about nature, but anyway, it is a very beautiful, colorful, and visual poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Tony Bronk Wisconsin

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for your reivew

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

This is so very lovely indeed. You did such a fantastic job with this five seven five indeed. Way to go as it is most wonderfully beautiful. I love butterflies.

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for your review

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yes, and hummingbirds quite often too in our garden.

Your 5-7-5 on nature is well written, wonderfully conveyed, and beautifully presented. Your syllable count is perfect.

I see nothing out of the ordinary to recommend you edit. This is a very strong entry for the contest.

Good luck to you.

~Dean

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you for your review-love the flower picture too.

reply by Dean Kuch on 09-May-2016

It was my pleasure.
Best of luck! :)

Comment from jonathan1

Excellent

I really enjoyed this piece. It really does stir ones senses and transports you to a garden which is a huge accomplishment given the simplicity of the style

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you

Comment from Rookette

Excellent

What a beautiful write! Your syllables are perfect and not at all forced. This flows beautifully and paints a lovely picture of spring. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! xoLeslie

 Comment Written 09-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

so very nicely written...I love butterflies...and my God dog is named Ladybug...and I love daisies...a beautiful nature poem...and I love the picture...

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 09-May-2016

Thank you

reply by l.raven on 09-May-2016

you are so welcome...xxoo Linda

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nature 5-7-5, Garden Of Delight, brings one into the beautiful and apparently delicious scene of a garden as the dew and sun meet to create a bastion of contentment.

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you for your review

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful artwork and very nice presentation.
-Good format.
-Very good imagery.
-Connection between lines one and two.
-Good satori line.
-Good entry for contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-May-2016

You are welcome.

Comment from infinityyingyang

Excellent

This was cleverly done and very heartwarming. It's so short and simple yet it holds so much meaning and I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thank you