Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Sometimes we just have our own writing style. If you find the right audience it won't matter so much if you have long sentences or whatever. I've never read Ron's work, or I don't think I have, but I'm sure he's very talented.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

He is on Face book I forget your FB name message me I will point him out to you. Thanks for the lovely review.

Comment from Mabaker

Excellent

So, by this I would take it that you reckon I should read Ron Craig? Hmm. Okay I'll bite, never heard of the bloke is he good or some sort of drongo? Take this with a grin Geoff, sincerely Anne.
Now I'll go find Ron!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

You would love him Anne similar Calibre to Mastery some similar sorts of stories. Ron is mentioning me in his Acknowledgements of his latest book for catching a lot of his as I call em "Spagarama" (copyright term of mine ok!) BY the way are you aware that Tom Ens maintenance time is around 5pm to 6pm our time? If you have ever had trouble getting on FS at that time that is why. They do it in the middle of the night USA time which is our tea time. Just so you know. Thanks for the review look for Roncraig, I think.

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

It's not paying but that's okay.
I love your new term 'Spagarama'. I'd say that describes the state of most first drafts. lol
Loved reading this. Your rhyme is good and now I know a little bit about Ron Craig.

:) e

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thanks mate sorry no reward it finished a day or two ago I think. I did a Revive on a poem I wrote about how we could not have children three years ago for Mother's day if you had not seen that before.

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Need to take a look at this author's work when I can, and like very creative writing...non boring material that seems to grab one's attention. Thanks for letting us know with your entertaining poetry and author notes.

Caressa_08

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thanks Caressa not sure you got anything for your fie review. I think it finished yesterday. Look for Roncraig

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Your opinion has been well expressed.
It is good to see that small annoyances don't detract from the
subject and quality of the story.
I like the image and presentation.
"-) Shirley

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thanks fellow Aussie you would love Roncraig 's stories look for him on here. How is Erin doing anymore competitions? Still into farming?

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

I am not familiar with the author, Ron Craig, but this whimsical tribute is cute and funny. I enjoyed your coined word, "Spagaramas".

Nice work, enjoyable and read smoothly, Sankey.

Have a great Sunday,
Senyai

 Comment Written 08-May-2016

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reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Thanks new friend. Look for Roncraig his stuff is really great to read. I have a whole swag of great writers I enjoy reading in FS.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem about this author. I haven't heard of him, but sounds like an interesting read. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thanks Barbara look for Roncraig. Appreciate the review.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

If a writer can make sense with long sentences, that's fine. We usually associate long sentences with those literary giants, like William Faulkner. It's a matter of style and what works for that particular story. I'm not familiar with Ron Craig's work. Will have to check that out. Interesting, engaging style. You're rhyming is excellent. Great lines about Ron galloping off on his steed. Suggests his writing is fast-paced and exciting. judi

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Hi Sis, yes Ron's stuff is great he is clever at getting us all hyped up worried that something is coming unstuck then he comes up with a good solution. Look for RonCraig I think that should find him. Thanks for the review.

reply by judiverse on 07-May-2016

You're very welcome. Long sentences or short ones, just write like yourself. judi

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A couple of lovely self created words here, you have already put your hand up to spagoramas but I like apprentences as well. Is a phrase and apprentence, an apprentice sentence? It will need to grow into a verb at some stage, but not perhaps just yet.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thanks Pantygynt. Appreciate the lovely review. Glad you like my new words. Here in Australia, you often find a new word only has to get used for a short time and it turns up as accepted for general use in our Macquarie Dictionary, hehe. One of my others is "Cerebral haemorrhoid" As opposed to Cerebral haemorrhage ( blood clot in the brain) Cerebral haemorrhoid means being angry from top to bottom! Check my "Geoffossary" Last Chapter in The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go- Subtitled God NEVER Lets Go" still being worked on.

reply by Pantygynt on 08-May-2016

Are cerebral haemorrhoids piles of brains or piles on the brain? I need the answer for some self diagnosis.

reply by the author on 08-May-2016

Nah Cerebral Haemorrage(sp??) is blood clotting in the brain often a cause of stroke or can be lethal as I have knownof several cases. My whacky word Cerebral Haemorrhoid(sp?) is being really angry or upset from the top of your head to your feet. Thanks for asking.

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

I do enjoy what you write and especially when you explain why you have written a piece. It puts it all into context for a better understanding. I get a kick out of your humor and it is so refreshing. Keep it up as it is appreciated. Great job.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thanks Sis. Appeciate your fine words. Found another Sis in the Lord on here yesterday. Isn't it exciting all the believers in FS.