Sea Blue Sky
A spring sky canvas for our dreams47 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
I enjoyed this fun poem. It's seems meant to be read aloud and I did. I think you did an outstanding job with this piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you well-
Bill
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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I enjoyed this fun poem. It's seems meant to be read aloud and I did. I think you did an outstanding job with this piece. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you well-
Bill
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Bill, thank you so much for the generous review and well wishes:)
Senyai
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really
great in every way for
these words written
Spring time can bring us
beautiful days and windy days.
Winds can be gusty at times.
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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The art work is really
great in every way for
these words written
Spring time can bring us
beautiful days and windy days.
Winds can be gusty at times.
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Thank you, Honeytree. Your sweet words made my day:)
Senyai
Comment from DonandVicki
A poem that stirs the imagination, which is what all good poetry should do.A lovely tribute to spring. Nicely cnostructed without the use of rhyme.
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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A poem that stirs the imagination, which is what all good poetry should do.A lovely tribute to spring. Nicely cnostructed without the use of rhyme.
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Thanks for the kind words and interesting thoughts on my work, Don and Vicki.
It is deeply appreciated :)
Senyai
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am a certified cloud watcher. I could sit for hours watching as clouds evolve. Great imagery. I find this style of poetry very interesting and it must be quite challenging. You managed to pull off a winner. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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I am a certified cloud watcher. I could sit for hours watching as clouds evolve. Great imagery. I find this style of poetry very interesting and it must be quite challenging. You managed to pull off a winner. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Hi Gretchen, thank you for such an uplifting review and encouraging thoughts.
I appreciate them both so much.
Senyai
Comment from Liberty Justice
Lovely poem for contest describing events of springs as dogs run and play. Describes nature's playfulness in vivid colors and sounds. We can indeed tell by sweet verses spring is here. Check mine out also dear poet. Good luck contests. liberty justice
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Lovely poem for contest describing events of springs as dogs run and play. Describes nature's playfulness in vivid colors and sounds. We can indeed tell by sweet verses spring is here. Check mine out also dear poet. Good luck contests. liberty justice
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 10-May-2016
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Hi Liberty,
Thanks for some really nice comments on my little palindrome. My first one.
(I will take a peek at your portfolio :)
Senyai
Comment from Taffspride
Beautiful, I love the imagery in your words which could easily stand alone. Although the art work certainly compliments it.
This is certainly fine palindrome form. among the best of the best here.
After reading the entire poem aloud several times, I wanted to find the lines that had the most impact. These were the ones:-
empty, waiting for
dreams
They were very well put leaving the reader pause for thought, or dreams!!!
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Beautiful, I love the imagery in your words which could easily stand alone. Although the art work certainly compliments it.
This is certainly fine palindrome form. among the best of the best here.
After reading the entire poem aloud several times, I wanted to find the lines that had the most impact. These were the ones:-
empty, waiting for
dreams
They were very well put leaving the reader pause for thought, or dreams!!!
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
What a lovely review, Taffspride. You are truly kind with your encouraging words and kind thoughts on my work.
Have a wonderful Mother's Day!
Senyai
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You are welcome. :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
What a lovely Palindrome poem you have written, Senyai! I love the light, airy feel that I got when I read your poem. Your poem really does convey a "joy" and "playfulness" to your reader. Your poem reads equally as well when read backward or forward. This is not easy to achieve, but you have mastered it well here. I think this poem will fare quite well in the contest! Best wishes for the contest, Senyai!
Connie
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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What a lovely Palindrome poem you have written, Senyai! I love the light, airy feel that I got when I read your poem. Your poem really does convey a "joy" and "playfulness" to your reader. Your poem reads equally as well when read backward or forward. This is not easy to achieve, but you have mastered it well here. I think this poem will fare quite well in the contest! Best wishes for the contest, Senyai!
Connie
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Hi Bichonfrisegirl, what a wonderful review! I deeply appreciate your kind thoughts and well wishes. My first palindrome was a challenge but much more fun to do than I thought. Not near as restrictive a poetry form as anticipated.
Have a wonderful Mother's Day.
Senyai
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Happy Mother's Day to you as well ... if you are a mother. :)
Your comments give me motivation to attempt writing a Palindrome some day soon!
Comment from Domino 2
With respect to quite a few other excellent palindromes I've recently read, this is the best, IMO, Senyai.
My one tiny nit-pick is the slightly formidable block format, and I respectfully suggest you create two line spaces - one before, and one after, 'dreams'. This will also allow the reader to take a breath, pause and ponder on your words, and also emphasise this is the 'pivot' of the poem.
I could be wrong, so I won't be offended if you disagree.
So many words to reverse and still make perfect sense with lots of imagery.
A sixer from me.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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With respect to quite a few other excellent palindromes I've recently read, this is the best, IMO, Senyai.
My one tiny nit-pick is the slightly formidable block format, and I respectfully suggest you create two line spaces - one before, and one after, 'dreams'. This will also allow the reader to take a breath, pause and ponder on your words, and also emphasise this is the 'pivot' of the poem.
I could be wrong, so I won't be offended if you disagree.
So many words to reverse and still make perfect sense with lots of imagery.
A sixer from me.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Wow, Ray. Thank you for such a generous review my friend. I will give your suggestions a look see. You are too kind with the gift of gold.
Have a wonderful Sunday,
Senyai
Comment from RosieCus
You've created some wonderful images of spring.My Favourite is "painting cloud pictures". Your pen was a paint brush when you painted this poem.
Good luck in the competition
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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You've created some wonderful images of spring.My Favourite is "painting cloud pictures". Your pen was a paint brush when you painted this poem.
Good luck in the competition
Comment Written 08-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
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Hi Rosie. Thank you so much for your encouraging words and generous review.
Senyai :)
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You're welcome
Comment from candyfink
I thought this poem was light and peaceful. I think the centered format is perfect as well as the picture. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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I thought this poem was light and peaceful. I think the centered format is perfect as well as the picture. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 07-May-2016
reply by the author on 08-May-2016
Thank you for your thoughts and encouraging words, CandyBarr.
Have a great Sunday
Senyai :)