Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I like this the two sides are presented well, showing the two extreme types of relationships. Well written, makes the reader think about what side should he pick.

 Comment Written 10-May-2016

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reply by the author on 10-May-2016

Thank you I really appreciate

Comment from clawhammer

Excellent

I really like this poem. I like the way it flows and the way the words work together. It is really beautiful. The feeling of being torn between two people and having to make a choice really comes through. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-May-2016

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reply by the author on 10-May-2016

Thank you I really appreciate

Comment from thonnigford09

Exceptional

I love this! Both women seem fabulous! Remember, they have color contacts, falsies, and hair dye!!!! Go for love!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thonnigford09

 Comment Written 10-May-2016

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reply by the author on 10-May-2016

Thank you I really appreciate:)

reply by thonnigford09 on 10-May-2016

Thanks!!

Comment from rbutner

Excellent

Very well written. I like that the reader is part of the decision as well. Isn't love a better choice than desire? After all, it is more eternal, right? Note, breath in line 4 in the second stanza should not have an "e" at the end. (Then it becomes like breathe in the scent of the roses) Sorry, I'm ocd about spelling.

 Comment Written 07-May-2016

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reply by the author on 07-May-2016

Thank you very much i appreciate your review

Comment from candyfink

Excellent

I thought I had this before or maybe I forgot to leave a review. However it goes, you are a talented writer. This situation is more common than we want to admit to.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you so much I cherish your review

Comment from pmait

Excellent

This second poem of yours today is free verse, with internal rhyme sparse and seemingly accidental, which draws attention away from form to content. The choice of two--attractive danger vs. comfortable safety--desire vs. love--why can't we have both? Maybe we can, but we don't find out until after we choose the right one.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you so much I cherish your review

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

this is good a choice between two women, Id with the first one myself given the choice by the way you describe her. great job on the write, thanks for the sharing the thoughts and choice.

 Comment Written 05-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you William

Comment from tony bronk

Excellent

You are, and I don't say this negatively, but you seem to have a style of obscurity. I guess one could say that you are "subtle." An excellent write! Tony Bronk

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Thank you Tony for your observations and review

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

The choice is only yours, choose wisely. The straight road will be the safest in my opinion, you can still have pleasure without the danger of a broken heart, which will definitely happens with the other choice, one man alone won't keep her happy. Just my opinion.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 03-May-2016

Than you for the review

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

Well, if he is a typical man, he'll have them both...LOL. This is a very well written poem, I love the description of the woman and the man's pondering. This poem reminds me of the Bachelor, the reality TV show. The poem has a nice flow, good job with this piece.

 Comment Written 01-May-2016

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reply by the author on 01-May-2016

Lol ...will he be labelled a player if he have them both ?I appreciate your review.Thank you