New Life
Contest Entry30 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi Ulla, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I don't thnk you've taken a liberty your words are really brilliantI wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Hi Ulla, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, I don't thnk you've taken a liberty your words are really brilliantI wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thanks a lot Eric, for your kind review. I got a third place and with the new rules a yellow ribbon to go with it. Hehe, All the best. Ulla:))
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You are welcome my Ulla, well done!
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
Beautiful:)Excellent piece of work .I can relate with this beautiful poem. I love the rhyme . You have great writing skills. I enjoy your unique writing style .Good job
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Beautiful:)Excellent piece of work .I can relate with this beautiful poem. I love the rhyme . You have great writing skills. I enjoy your unique writing style .Good job
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 01-May-2016
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Thanks ever so much. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Wonderful poem, and I am so happy and proud I chose to review your poetry. It really does have the feeling of a new; Like you said, something being born. The artwork is also a beautiful fit, giving me that same feeling as the poem. Great read, thanks. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Wonderful poem, and I am so happy and proud I chose to review your poetry. It really does have the feeling of a new; Like you said, something being born. The artwork is also a beautiful fit, giving me that same feeling as the poem. Great read, thanks. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thanks a lot for the great review. I'm so pleased. All the best. Ulla:))
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you are so welcome.
Comment from victor 66
The words in your acrostic poem flow very nicely and have a feel of romance. Following an A _ B_ C format is a bit of a challenge and that has been accomplished here as well. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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The words in your acrostic poem flow very nicely and have a feel of romance. Following an A _ B_ C format is a bit of a challenge and that has been accomplished here as well. Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for the great review. Very much appreciated. All the best. Ulla
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Again, you are most welcome, Ulla. I wish you well.
Comment from JanPerry
Great commentary and works with visionary and imagery to match.
Very well said on every line and it works with the alphabet too.
No suggestions, you have it made.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Great commentary and works with visionary and imagery to match.
Very well said on every line and it works with the alphabet too.
No suggestions, you have it made.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thank a lot forthis great revie. all the best. Ulla:)
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no problemas!
Comment from robyn corum
Neat way to describe the birth of a new star -- though that one you have pictured is a bit odd...with a cat(?) a fairy and a man? THAT's a story all on it's own! hahaha
Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Neat way to describe the birth of a new star -- though that one you have pictured is a bit odd...with a cat(?) a fairy and a man? THAT's a story all on it's own! hahaha
Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thanks so much, Robyn, I know the picture could be a story on its own. However, looking at it it's also telling a story of new life. I became third so can't be that bad. LOL. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Your words are as a fantasy.. very enjoyable to read. Also- I think you picked a perfect picture for your poem. Well done
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Your words are as a fantasy.. very enjoyable to read. Also- I think you picked a perfect picture for your poem. Well done
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Right, straight off, you give me a four star and tell me my words are like a fantasy, and the picture is perfect and an enjoyable to read. So please tell me where the adjustments have to be made. Have you read the guidelines for reviewing?
Six stars: Exceptional, simply outstanding.
Five stars: Excellent:enjoyable and no revision needed.
Four stars: Good, Adjustments needed.
Three stars: Below average
Two stars: Below average , needs lots of work
One star: Poor, Mjor revision needed.
You have given me a four star so please do tell me the adjustments I need to make. Ulla
Comment from c_lucas
Lovers prefer the stars are in their eyes as the view one another. This is a very well written poem. It gives the reader something to think about. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Lovers prefer the stars are in their eyes as the view one another. This is a very well written poem. It gives the reader something to think about. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
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Thanks a lot for this great review. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment from DonandVicki
A lovely ABC poem and you took your time to make this a very thought provoking verse. Nicely composed and rich in imagery. well done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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A lovely ABC poem and you took your time to make this a very thought provoking verse. Nicely composed and rich in imagery. well done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thanks ever so much for this fine review. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from Pantygynt
Well why not take a liberty? It is actually quite logical. I defy anyony to be able to pinpoint where that shooting star came from in the heavens. That is where the new star is, waiting for all those light years to pass before we can see it. What we saw was the explosion that caused its birth, but we were watching the wrong end of the light.
Who the hell cares about science? This is poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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Well why not take a liberty? It is actually quite logical. I defy anyony to be able to pinpoint where that shooting star came from in the heavens. That is where the new star is, waiting for all those light years to pass before we can see it. What we saw was the explosion that caused its birth, but we were watching the wrong end of the light.
Who the hell cares about science? This is poetry.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2016
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I couldn't agree more, thanks for the great review and the support of my imagination. All the best. Ulla:))
