Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "With age comes wisdom"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
18 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Marki
= Goodness you are so right!
= The heck with what people say, expect, think.
= I've been through too darn much to worry or live up to what someone deems I should.
= Love the poem.
= FYI ... the latest chapter in your book comes up blank in the body.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
Hi, Marki
= Goodness you are so right!
= The heck with what people say, expect, think.
= I've been through too darn much to worry or live up to what someone deems I should.
= Love the poem.
= FYI ... the latest chapter in your book comes up blank in the body.
~::~ A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! ~::~
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
~::~ Feel free to visit my profile on Amazon.com ~::~
amazon.com/author/jacquelinefranklin
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hi again, Jacqueline. Thanks for your kind generous review. I'm pleased you enjoyed. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
The problem with my latest chapter has been fixed. Thanks for letting me know :o)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Marijke,
You seemed to have captured the happy side of aging
and I hope I can embrace your positivity...or stay
miserable:(
Your poem with its short lines and alternating rhymes
has a musical feel to it and should be distributed at
every over 55 community and every senior home...lol
That is a cute photo and I guess you will continue to
be inspired by those circulating photos...At least they
are good for something.
Linda
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
Marijke,
You seemed to have captured the happy side of aging
and I hope I can embrace your positivity...or stay
miserable:(
Your poem with its short lines and alternating rhymes
has a musical feel to it and should be distributed at
every over 55 community and every senior home...lol
That is a cute photo and I guess you will continue to
be inspired by those circulating photos...At least they
are good for something.
Linda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hi Linda. I'm pleased you enjoyed, as I enjoyed writing this one. I have a couple more of those photos which might lend themselves to a poem down the track... you never know. Thanks for your kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from CD Richards
With age comes wisdom? Why didn't somebody tell me!
I like this very much, Marijke. It flows effortlessly, the rhyme and meter are great.
I also agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments expressed (well, except for the wisdom bit - I'm still waiting).
Love the shirts - I want a set (obviously not with Jan, but it's close).
Very nice work.
Craig
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
With age comes wisdom? Why didn't somebody tell me!
I like this very much, Marijke. It flows effortlessly, the rhyme and meter are great.
I also agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments expressed (well, except for the wisdom bit - I'm still waiting).
Love the shirts - I want a set (obviously not with Jan, but it's close).
Very nice work.
Craig
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Hi Craig. Well... I have told you now. my friend! (Although, I must say, I know of some exceptions! You excluded.) Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Huge smile Marijke
Love the picture.
I like how you say as us older folks age we get wiser
Yes the children left the nest but
They sill call Mom and Dad to get advice.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
Huge smile Marijke
Love the picture.
I like how you say as us older folks age we get wiser
Yes the children left the nest but
They sill call Mom and Dad to get advice.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Thank you, Gert, for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from L.lora
This little ditty just waltzes the reader right on down the page with such ease. It definitely puts a smile on ones face, especially when one is of the age to truly appreciate the thoughts and time you've put into this with your gentle rhyme. I really enjoyed this. Lora
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
This little ditty just waltzes the reader right on down the page with such ease. It definitely puts a smile on ones face, especially when one is of the age to truly appreciate the thoughts and time you've put into this with your gentle rhyme. I really enjoyed this. Lora
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Thank you, Lora, for your kind review and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Marijke, How very true This is great and as it should be, Well written and says a lot of what we should and do do as we get older . Enjoy each others company and have fun .
i really liked this ( a six in my mind but waiting for some) Cheers Christine Loved the image LOL ð???
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
Hi Marijke, How very true This is great and as it should be, Well written and says a lot of what we should and do do as we get older . Enjoy each others company and have fun .
i really liked this ( a six in my mind but waiting for some) Cheers Christine Loved the image LOL ð???
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Thank you, Chrissy, for your kind review and generous 'virtual' six star rating, my friend. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Marijke. Love this poem very much, I agree with the wisdom, but on the fun I have to wait a while I"m afraid...LOL. Usual it goes the way you discribed.
When children have left home you have the time to do what you want. Freedom is waiting.... Maybe there comes a time I can enjoy it too...
Lots of love and smiles from miles. Fietje xxxxxx
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
Hi Marijke. Love this poem very much, I agree with the wisdom, but on the fun I have to wait a while I"m afraid...LOL. Usual it goes the way you discribed.
When children have left home you have the time to do what you want. Freedom is waiting.... Maybe there comes a time I can enjoy it too...
Lots of love and smiles from miles. Fietje xxxxxx
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Hi Fietje. I am sure your time will come, my dearest friend. Make sure you do go out and enjoy the company of your friends, no matter what. Thanks for your comments, my friend, look after yourself. Warmest regards , hugs and miles of Tassie smiles ... Marijke :o)
Comment from Joan E.
I relished those T-shirts and want a set! Thanks for more reminders that age is just an attitude. Your poem resonated for me and your rhymed quatrains were appealing. Yes, "here is to wisdom" that age brings" and enjoy the "stage"! -Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
I relished those T-shirts and want a set! Thanks for more reminders that age is just an attitude. Your poem resonated for me and your rhymed quatrains were appealing. Yes, "here is to wisdom" that age brings" and enjoy the "stage"! -Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Hi Joan. Thank you so much for your kind review and observations. Warmest regards ... Marijke :o)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Marijke!
What a funny picture! Love it! There is so much wisdom in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Great work!
Kim
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
Hi Marijke!
What a funny picture! Love it! There is so much wisdom in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Great work!
Kim
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Hi Kim. Thank you so much for your kind review and observations. Warmest regards ... Marijke :o)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. It flows smoothly and tells of a great thing. To be able to enjoy this time of your life is great. Your words speak well to that aspect. The picture is perfect. I do like the rhyme. This is a great bit of wisdom that many should take up. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
I enjoyed your poem. It flows smoothly and tells of a great thing. To be able to enjoy this time of your life is great. Your words speak well to that aspect. The picture is perfect. I do like the rhyme. This is a great bit of wisdom that many should take up. Good job and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for your kind review and observations. Warmest regards ... Marijke :o)