Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Marki

= LOL! Watch them balls!
= The pic is priceless.
= It goes with your poem perfectly.
= Even it you need a cane, just git 'er done!

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Hi Jacqueline. Thanks for your kind generous review. I'm pleased you enjoyed. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Oh wow, love this one. The flow is great, captures your reader right off and your closing line is perfect. I needed the chuckle, my kind of humor. no nits, etc. Lora

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Thank you, Lora, for your kind review and generous rating, I'm pleased I could provide a chuckle... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

This lovely sweet poem gave me a big laugh at the end. Well , the age of lovers is unlimited. You see them now and then and they make my heart melt.
So does this poem. Hugs and lots of love Fietje xxxx

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Fietje. Thank you so much for this very generous string of stars, my friend. My muse made me do it... that last line just popped in before I knew it was there.... I'm pleased you enjoyed this and I am pleased it gave you a laugh. Warmest regards and hugs ... Marijke :o)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I needed a good chuckle and the accompanying photo hit the spot! I hope I'll be laughing as much in 21 more years!! I enjoyed your mono-verse rhyme in these clever tercets. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Joan. Thank you so much for your kind review, my friend. My muse made me do it... that last line just popped in before I knew it was there.... I'm pleased you enjoyed this and I am pleased it gave you a laugh. Warmest regards and hugs ... Marijke :o)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

LOL I enjoyed your poem. Good job with the mono-rhyme of each verse. The picture is great. Who says love is only for certain ages? Your words fit the subject nicely. Good job and thanks for sharing a fun read. Jan

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Jan. Thank you so much for your kind review, my friend. My muse made me do it... that last line just popped in before I knew it was there.... I'm pleased you enjoyed this and I am pleased it gave you a laugh. Warmest regards and hugs ... Marijke :o)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is too funny! I love both the picture and the poem. They are perfect together. Great last line in this cleverly penned poem. Have a good evening, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Debbie. Thank you so much for your kind review, my friend. My muse made me do it... that last line just popped in before I knew it was there.... I'm pleased you enjoyed this and I am pleased it gave you a laugh. Warmest regards and hugs ... Marijke :o)

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Oh heavens, that last line is humorous but a little graphic. Oh well . Great description of the fact that older people still want to be held and loved. You also got a great picture to go along with it. Thank you.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Jusylee. Thank you so much for your kind review, my friend. My muse made me do it... that last line just popped in before I knew it was there.... I'm pleased you enjoyed this and I hope it gave you a laugh. Warmest regards and hugs ... Marijke :o)

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Haha, Marijke!

Here I'm reading along your nice little rhymed
lines and I come across frozen balls. Dear lord...
this is what happens when friends send you photos?

Very fun,
Linda

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Linda, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

reply by AnnaLinda on 23-Apr-2016

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Comment from William Ross

Excellent

haha very good great little witty and fun write, I'd get on my knees but my balls might freeze lol a good fun poem for your book, have a great day

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi William, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Marijke!

This was a cute rhyming poem with a hysterical ending! You were certainly correct to choose it as humor. Thanks for sharing today!

The words and the picture match to perfection! lol

Kim

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016

Hi Kim, thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed. That last stanza and line, sort of just popped up out of nowhere... I think my muse was in a strange mood. Thanks for laughing with me... Warmest regards, Marijke :o)