Comment from L.lora

Excellent

Oh this is just perfection, easy flow
with the wonderful word choices. Sensitive,
loving and heartfelt, not at all like a
greeting card--just well penned and straight
forward. Exquisite. Lora

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016

Hi again, Lora, Thanks for your another kind review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for honoring your sister-in-law's request and sharing the simply spoken but sensitive tribute in rhymed quatrains. Warm regards- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Hi again Joan, thank you for your comments and kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Marijke. At first place my condolences. You did a great job to write this for Ken and your sister in law. I can imagine words are hard to find on this moment for her
It's terrible to lose your beloved big brother, but you expressed her feelings well.
A wonderful last farewell. Lots of love and smiles from miles. Fietje xxxx

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016

Hi Fietje, thank you again for another one of your kind review, comments and generous review. Warmest regards with miles and miles of Tassie smiles... Marijke :o) xxxxxx

Comment from CALLAHANMR

Exceptional

Hi Fiona:)
This is a beautiful goodbye to your sister-in-law's brother. I'm sure she must see it as the perfect send off for such a sad occasion.
Love and Irish hugs to pass on to your sister-in-law and her family.

Roger.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you for your lovely review and comments, Roger. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You really did a nice job on this. I think your sister-in=law is going to be very touched. This is a great tribute. Well done Marijke

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you for your kind review and generous rating, Douglas. I hope she will be, I will see her later today. Warmest regards, Marijke. :o)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

what a nice thought you wrote about ken My sister-in-law's brother passed away.

nicely said

So, goodbye brother, you are at peace,
you have earned your rest.
I know I'll miss you desperately.
You really were the best.

Gert

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you Gert, for your kind review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Apr-2016

miles Marijke
Gert

Comment from Sasha

Exceptional

How sad. I think you did a lovely job with this poem and the family should be very pleased with it too. I don't remember if I already told you this and apologize if I have, but I will be off site for awhile getting ready for surgery on my broken ribs. This darn saga is going on far too long!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you again, and good luck with your surgery. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Marijke. Oh yes I knew I liked your style someone of my own heart. great to read and not flowery but lovely and your sister-in-law will love it Nice work Sorry for your loss Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Thank you so much , Chris, for your kind words and review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great remembrance/tribute to your sister-in-laws brother. It flows well and has great rhyme.

Good job with a sad subject. I know the family will receive your poem well.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016

Hi jannypan . Thank you for your comments and review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

There is a simplicity to this poem that speaks from the heart. Ken has passed on but he will be missed as a big brother and someone who absence is real physically but unreal emotionally.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2016

Hi Marykelly. Thanks for that warm and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)