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Comment from PoemsOfDD
Marvin, this was a good read. I like that it flowed and maintained my interest to the end. I also appreciated that there were not obvious errors so my enjoyment of reading was not interrupted at all. I look forward to knowing where dinner ends up. Thanks for the read. ~DD
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Marvin, this was a good read. I like that it flowed and maintained my interest to the end. I also appreciated that there were not obvious errors so my enjoyment of reading was not interrupted at all. I look forward to knowing where dinner ends up. Thanks for the read. ~DD
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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DD
Thanks for reviewing this small slice.
I appreciate all your nice comments.
Russ will be surprised where they eat.
Marv
Comment from BeasPeas
Started a review on this and it got lost somehow. I was saying--short and sweet. I like it, though. It allows more time to focus on the snappy dialogue and one liners that I like. For instance: ""What are you wearing?" said a breathy female voice. Of course, this came from my phone. Right now, my computer and I aren't on speaking terms." Many other good lines within. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Started a review on this and it got lost somehow. I was saying--short and sweet. I like it, though. It allows more time to focus on the snappy dialogue and one liners that I like. For instance: ""What are you wearing?" said a breathy female voice. Of course, this came from my phone. Right now, my computer and I aren't on speaking terms." Many other good lines within. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2016
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Marilyn
Thank you for your review. Happy to hear you liked it. Short and sweet is good.
Thanks for the high rating.
Marv
