Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

Humans are the least agile of all animals, but perhaps also the only ones who spend time admiring others more beautiful and graceful. We should wonder what others think of us.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is clever. It makes you wonder how closely the animals are watching the humans and what they think of them if they do. The eagle and the osprey have an interesting take. The poor humans are more or less just lying there in the pool, while the birds are soaring overhead. Great work, and so creative.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 04-May-2016

You're welcome. Write on! judi

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

sight"
a different take on the sight of humans in the pool.
I bet sometimes the animals in the zoo have interesting conversations about us.
Nicely done

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

I also believe the animals in the zoo have conversations about us. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Oh! I'm sure you're right - they are making hysterical fun of us! "Look! They think they're fish!" hahahaha

A fun poem, Mermaids! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-May-2016

Thanks for a great review. Elaine