Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

I never cross the line with a friend! Your choice of artwork is quite perfect for this poem. It has many poignant thoughts and feelings in the last three couplets! But your first three couple has those thought provoking questions! The feeder in the end says it all!!!!

Love the background hue and your font color makes a great combination,,,,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017

Thank you, my friend :)

Missy

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

YIKES! NO! Emphatically! Don't do it - a friendship is a valuable thing, and unless and until you are sure your feelings are returned it is a very, very poor gamble! However, IF you are sure, by all means -ALL IN! (See what your poem did to me? LOL. Sorry I am so late, but I'm sure glad I didn't miss this beauty altogether!)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016

LOL!!! BOY THAT GOT YA BLOOD PUMPIN!!!
Thanks sug for the review...and it wasn't even paying!!!

Missy

reply by Dawn Munro on 16-Apr-2016

It sure did get the blood pumping! LOL. You are, of course, most welcome. :))

Comment from CEO2020

Excellent

Hi,

The poem has impactful thoughts that brings feelings behind the words. Nice presentation also. If you have time I would like your feedback on my new short story called Justifiable Delirium.

Thanks

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank you for giving this your time, C.
I grow with each review, in confidence and passion :)

Missy

Comment from lightink

Excellent

LOL! I love that closing thought! And I know that dilemma so well! I spent years trying to deny the undeniable. As you said:
"The heart wants
What the heart wants"

Great poem that's easy to relate to!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Hi LI,
Thank you, sweetie for this lovely and supportive R&R.

Hugs
Missy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I crossed the invisible line to love, to sweet kisses and wonderful touches form the man of my dreams and I have never regretted for a minute that I crossed the line to love. Patricia

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

How lucky you are, Patricia.
Thank you for this read and review xx

Missy

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

Your presentation in this poem is really fantastic. You pose an interesting question on the wisdom of trading a friendship in for love - always a tough decision

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016

Thank you, Douglas, for the lovely R&R :)

Missy

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

Well done. In a few words you told a big story. The illustration you chose is excellent for your "story" in the poem. Thank you for reminding me that love is a gamble. Good work.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016

Hi, Nancy, thank you for stopping and leaving this wonderful R&R for me!!

Hugs,
Missy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It was a joy to read and to review. I enjoyed it. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2016

Teri, thank you for giving me a portion of your day!!
I appreciate this, my friend.

Hugs,
Missy

Comment from Lannell912

Excellent

Love is just that a game . Playing it is not for the soft at heart we must all remember two -thats at lease how many must be involved to get started at what we call true love until then its a gamble . I PRAY we all find it one day and while we work on it or wait for it read beautiful words like yours/ your FRIEND LANNELL912

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

True, Lennell. I am just a romantic and my buttons are easily pushed :)
Thanks for the lovely review!!

Hugs,
Missy

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Beautiful artwork and poem. There's always the risk of losing the friendship. Sometimes, the heart does want what the heart wants.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2016

Grrr, I apologize for the length of time to respond...Life

I loved your review and promise to try and be more prompt should you review me again.

Hugs,
MIssy