Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Reflective Beauty"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
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Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
"Reflective beauty" indeed! You made a wonderful choice of Angelheart's art for
your entry. Those two repeated words work really well and I like the positive
thoughts within this. You've really got some inspiring concepts conveyed with
top rhymes.
Linda
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
Poet,
"Reflective beauty" indeed! You made a wonderful choice of Angelheart's art for
your entry. Those two repeated words work really well and I like the positive
thoughts within this. You've really got some inspiring concepts conveyed with
top rhymes.
Linda
Comment Written 13-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Hi Linda, thank you so much for that lovely review and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi!
I like how you have woven the symmetry of the artwork into your writing of this poem. The repetitions are like a shimmering reflection from the stanza before. Multiple rhymes in each stanza make this a beautiful piece to read.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
Hi!
I like how you have woven the symmetry of the artwork into your writing of this poem. The repetitions are like a shimmering reflection from the stanza before. Multiple rhymes in each stanza make this a beautiful piece to read.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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Hi Kim. Thanks for liking the symmetry of the artwork (isn't it stunning? _ I love Angelheart's work). Thank you too for your kind and warm review and generous rating. Wrmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from foxangie123
Goodness gracious. You did such a stunning job with this and thank you so much for entering my contest. You are so very talented...
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
Goodness gracious. You did such a stunning job with this and thank you so much for entering my contest. You are so very talented...
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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Thank you for that lovely compliment, and thank you for setting this contest up. It has inspired me to keep writing every day. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from William Ross
Very good, yeah there is a reflective beauty in these things and possibly be in humanity. Great write and thought on this. good luck and have a good day.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
Very good, yeah there is a reflective beauty in these things and possibly be in humanity. Great write and thought on this. good luck and have a good day.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Thank you William, for your kind comments, observations and generous review. Warmest regards, :o)
Comment from thonnigford09
This was a wonderfully well written poem and I love Angelheart's artwork!!!!!!!!! The poem flows well and you have done an amazing job, writing a poem to complement the art. Nicely done. Thanks, thonnigford09
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
This was a wonderfully well written poem and I love Angelheart's artwork!!!!!!!!! The poem flows well and you have done an amazing job, writing a poem to complement the art. Nicely done. Thanks, thonnigford09
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Wow! Thank you so much, thonnigford09, for your warm and generous review and that long string of stars. I truly appreciate them. Thank you. Warmest regards :o)
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You're welcome:)
Comment from tfawcus
Now I'm trying to guess which Australian! I like the way you have used the same poetic structure and opening line to describe each of the various facets of reflective beauty. Your hopes in the last stanza are ones that I think we can all share.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
Now I'm trying to guess which Australian! I like the way you have used the same poetic structure and opening line to describe each of the various facets of reflective beauty. Your hopes in the last stanza are ones that I think we can all share.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Hi tfawcus, thank you so much for your comments, observations and generous review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from BruceMiller
You certainly have created a very good offering for the contest. I really enjoy the artwork that you have chosen. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
You certainly have created a very good offering for the contest. I really enjoy the artwork that you have chosen. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Hi Bruce, thank you so much for this kind review and your generous rating. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. Your words flow well and tell of hope for humanity. Good job on the mono rhyme of each verse.
Your words and the artwork pair nicely together.
Good job.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
I enjoyed your poem. Your words flow well and tell of hope for humanity. Good job on the mono rhyme of each verse.
Your words and the artwork pair nicely together.
Good job.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
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Hi jannypan, thank you so very much for this generous review and rating. Warmest regards, :o)
Comment from royowen
Nicely penned poem, articulate, eloqent language written in a descriptive work that endeavours to beautify the already considerable giftedness of the prompted artist. Written and presented as an entry in this contest, in mono rhymed triplets, this ranks highly as a great piece, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
Nicely penned poem, articulate, eloqent language written in a descriptive work that endeavours to beautify the already considerable giftedness of the prompted artist. Written and presented as an entry in this contest, in mono rhymed triplets, this ranks highly as a great piece, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi Roy, thank you so much for your lovely and generous review. Angelheart's art makes it easier for us poets to write about beauty and perceived beauty. Thanks again, and warmest regards.
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You're right, well done
Comment from djeckert
this was a,strong entry. it seems to rwally add alot to that awesome image. calling to mind all of the beauty waitung for us in the afterlife where God has many rooms, and eye has not seen and ear has not heard the things God has planned for us. Nice.God Bless
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
this was a,strong entry. it seems to rwally add alot to that awesome image. calling to mind all of the beauty waitung for us in the afterlife where God has many rooms, and eye has not seen and ear has not heard the things God has planned for us. Nice.God Bless
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
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Hi and thank you so much for your lovely and generous review. Angelheart's art makes it easier for us poets to write about beauty and perceived beauty. Thanks again, and warmest regards.