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This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe

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Comment from AnnaLinda
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Poet,

"Reflective beauty" indeed! You made a wonderful choice of Angelheart's art for
your entry. Those two repeated words work really well and I like the positive
thoughts within this. You've really got some inspiring concepts conveyed with
top rhymes.

Linda


 Comment Written 13-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
    Hi Linda, thank you so much for that lovely review and generous rating. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi!

I like how you have woven the symmetry of the artwork into your writing of this poem. The repetitions are like a shimmering reflection from the stanza before. Multiple rhymes in each stanza make this a beautiful piece to read.

Good luck in the contest!

Kim

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    Hi Kim. Thanks for liking the symmetry of the artwork (isn't it stunning? _ I love Angelheart's work). Thank you too for your kind and warm review and generous rating. Wrmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from foxangie123
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Goodness gracious. You did such a stunning job with this and thank you so much for entering my contest. You are so very talented...

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
    Thank you for that lovely compliment, and thank you for setting this contest up. It has inspired me to keep writing every day. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from William Ross
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Very good, yeah there is a reflective beauty in these things and possibly be in humanity. Great write and thought on this. good luck and have a good day.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Thank you William, for your kind comments, observations and generous review. Warmest regards, :o)
Comment from thonnigford09
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This was a wonderfully well written poem and I love Angelheart's artwork!!!!!!!!! The poem flows well and you have done an amazing job, writing a poem to complement the art. Nicely done. Thanks, thonnigford09

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Wow! Thank you so much, thonnigford09, for your warm and generous review and that long string of stars. I truly appreciate them. Thank you. Warmest regards :o)
reply by thonnigford09 on 11-Apr-2016
    You're welcome:)
Comment from tfawcus
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Now I'm trying to guess which Australian! I like the way you have used the same poetic structure and opening line to describe each of the various facets of reflective beauty. Your hopes in the last stanza are ones that I think we can all share.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Hi tfawcus, thank you so much for your comments, observations and generous review. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from BruceMiller
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You certainly have created a very good offering for the contest. I really enjoy the artwork that you have chosen. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Hi Bruce, thank you so much for this kind review and your generous rating. Warmest regards :o)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem. Your words flow well and tell of hope for humanity. Good job on the mono rhyme of each verse.

Your words and the artwork pair nicely together.

Good job.

Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2016
    Hi jannypan, thank you so very much for this generous review and rating. Warmest regards, :o)
Comment from royowen
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Nicely penned poem, articulate, eloqent language written in a descriptive work that endeavours to beautify the already considerable giftedness of the prompted artist. Written and presented as an entry in this contest, in mono rhymed triplets, this ranks highly as a great piece, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
    Hi Roy, thank you so much for your lovely and generous review. Angelheart's art makes it easier for us poets to write about beauty and perceived beauty. Thanks again, and warmest regards.
reply by royowen on 10-Apr-2016
    You're right, well done
Comment from djeckert
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this was a,strong entry. it seems to rwally add alot to that awesome image. calling to mind all of the beauty waitung for us in the afterlife where God has many rooms, and eye has not seen and ear has not heard the things God has planned for us. Nice.God Bless

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
    Hi and thank you so much for your lovely and generous review. Angelheart's art makes it easier for us poets to write about beauty and perceived beauty. Thanks again, and warmest regards.