Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Ricky it is a very nice idea to write as though it is your son writing the story.
Perhaps adding some more art work and structure to your poems would help them to flow even better than they already do. Sometimes if it is pleasing to the eye then people will take the time to read more.
Just a thought.
Brenda

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

---

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

I thought I posted the picture of Jason and in that particular post but p'raps I didn't so I will go and be with you and I have my favorite one which is only a few feet across from me where I sleep and I've actually had to take the picture about 4 times so I got the one where he's right side up so to speak it's funny how the phone works you take the picture straight on and it's not going to be right you have to turn the camera and it is not upside down as we turned on the right side angle to catch it so it took me four times to get the right one so when I select the picture I have to realize that and it's and it's a position not the 4th picture but actually the first one so that's how confusing it is but as always thanks for spending the time to read my work I'm still blocked from doing reviews by the fence to a ministration and Tom due to the fact that my home he's he never died which got Blue Ribbon at all times but didn't mean anything when I said to this man when I had them ripped apart by some idiot and you only gave it two stars and it believe it into words were true and so when I reviewed one of his pieces of work I did the same exact thing and of course he reports me because he's a little sissy and thewo times they won't respond to me I told them to just cancel my two years worth of membership and return my money I have $5.01 worth of money not even enough I've talked to a few of them and told them to contact fanstorycom contacted them two times they won't respond to me I told them to just cancel my two years worth of membership and return my money I have $5.01 worth of money not even enough that promote my son's work what work once but they stayed afterward to court for you to buy buy and spend money on this site that's what they want your money they want more of your money I have never but I think once spent more than a nickel Board review on any of my work I'll allow it to stand alone if I have to spend money to promote my work and my work is it worth the time that I spend on it so maybe if I get enough people like you and other recognized writers like team coach coach and the mermaids and Liberty Justice and Angie and all the other people I follow me follow me we can sail from England Margaret Snowden who is a dear friend I've been following her for 4 years since I started on this like maybe if there's enough complaints on the reviews and are handled properly here by the administration when it comes to a problem maybe the changes will be made to these new and younger writers that are going to review with wanted to start there should be a cut-off point on a review it should they should not be allowed to go less than three stars and then only then if it's somebody did his work is really really lacking so to speak I very rarely give anybody less than four stars no matter what because the could be a younger writer here and they're very impressionable I know I know since there's warnings that you have to be 18 to continue following either to work because of the language of pictures that are used that there are children on this site I have no idea what their age limit isif they have a gift and thanks as always Ricky 1024

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

I find this writing very interesting. That only
a few will go and live forever in the Heaven
above? What kind of cult would say such a
thing? Our Lord Jesus never said that, He died
for us we just have to follow his teachings.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2016

---

reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016

thanks for your kind review