Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "They I Love"Dawn of Chaos
7 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
I did trip over the wording, found some possible errors, then gave up because I could not be sure. The message is a good one. And, it is abundantly clear. Was just a bit too scattered for my taste. I am not an expert. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I did trip over the wording, found some possible errors, then gave up because I could not be sure. The message is a good one. And, it is abundantly clear. Was just a bit too scattered for my taste. I am not an expert. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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I trust your statements, most of my writes suffering these pits. I do constant revisions on them. Thanking you for the thought intended not properly stated still a generous rate.
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I think you were using alliteration, weren?t you? I think it is just a matter taste. And, maybe I am too rigid
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in family there is always the need of love and compassion, and in togetherness the relation survives the best ever for peace and tranquillity; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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This speaks in family there is always the need of love and compassion, and in togetherness the relation survives the best ever for peace and tranquillity; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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The final resolution by understanding the realities of statements already known. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting views.
Comment from meeshu
excellent verse, TPAC. well paced and your use of language is so unique.
it gives this piece a sense of mystique. a pleasure to read...........meeshu
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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excellent verse, TPAC. well paced and your use of language is so unique.
it gives this piece a sense of mystique. a pleasure to read...........meeshu
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2018
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Glad you found ease in reading, most reflect trouble following my thoughts. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Beverly Botelho
Again you've written a beautiful piece. I can picture myself in this poem, saying the things you've said. Only one correction - ones in the second-to-last line should read one's. By the way, the last stanza is my favorite - love to think that one day there will be no wars, no abuse, no dissension. It encourages me to think one day we'll be there.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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Again you've written a beautiful piece. I can picture myself in this poem, saying the things you've said. Only one correction - ones in the second-to-last line should read one's. By the way, the last stanza is my favorite - love to think that one day there will be no wars, no abuse, no dissension. It encourages me to think one day we'll be there.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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Believe it life has a profound mystery about us: eternals having no beginning but placements. Glad you're enjoying writes. Good shout will revise. Thanking you for generous rate and touching statements.
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Love the line from your reply: eternals having no beginning but placements. Use that in a piece of writing!
Comment from foxangie123
I missed you to say the least. I've been in the hospital. You have some righteous skills with that pen of yours. You give readers hope through peace leading to tranquility. A leader to great things you are.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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I missed you to say the least. I've been in the hospital. You have some righteous skills with that pen of yours. You give readers hope through peace leading to tranquility. A leader to great things you are.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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Not me. Worm food at best. Glad this write pleased: wish you quick recovery. Thanking you for generous rate and touching thoughts.
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You rock..
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting poem you have penned. I like all the wording you used for this great poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Teri
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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This is a very interesting poem you have penned. I like all the wording you used for this great poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Teri
Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
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Glad the pits found in my works.didn't corrupt message. Thanking you for generous rate and touching statements.
Comment from thonnigford09
Wonderful and I hope when I get to where I'm going that I will see the Golden door such as you have described and also wonderful imagery here and beautiful artwork also. Thanks to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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Wonderful and I hope when I get to where I'm going that I will see the Golden door such as you have described and also wonderful imagery here and beautiful artwork also. Thanks to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2016
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Can't take credit for the artwork, but have found some touching expressions at FS: super sketches. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
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No problem!!!:)