Comment from Helen Bach

Excellent

I don't know about kids but I loved your story. I would enjoy reading your stories to any child I could get my hands on. You have a lovely way of unfolding your story... and loads of fab touches that are sure to raise a smile. 'kibble pancakes'...
Impressive stuff revealing a true talent for this genre x

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thank you, Helen for your wonderful comments. John

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

I think it is a great children's story that with illustrations I would read to my children. Very cute way of taking an old nursery rhyme and changing it into a vivid, fun lively story. I think it is wonderful.

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thank you so much for the wonderful and warm comments. I certainly appreciate the encouragement. John