Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Dogs love the ocean, it's true! At first I thought they might be your pups, but then I saw you used FanArtReview. Fun, cute poem :)
Carol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

I have a long haired mini dachshund but love all dogs. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

this is great.
the piece is easy to read and understand.
the descriptions you used makes it seem we are right there watching what you see.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Where the small dogs become mighty dogs. Dogs enjoy the sea too. I remember when we were living in Massachusetts the dogs would go over to the beach, just as the people did. It seemed to be part of their routine. You capture the enthusiasm of the dogs as they frolic on the beach. "Friend full of faithful fun" is excellent wording. Best of luck with your writing. judi

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Dogs do seem to enjoy walking and frolicking on the beach. I haven't walked my dog on the beach this year due to lack of time but he appeared to enjoy it in the past. Thanks for reading your positive comments. Elaine

Comment from BruceMiller

Excellent

You certainly have a cute little poem here. Nicely written. (but it does leave me with one little problem: I thought that a "salty dog" is some kind of cocktail. lol)

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

Hahahaha....I guess there is more than one kind of salty dog. Thanks for a great review. Elaine