A Month of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Feline Thoughts"30 poems for National Poetry Month
11 total reviews
Comment from MAMGALAM
All the best on your new venture ..
The Feline thought ..is a wonderful idea..
Of course , their life is that of leisure..
Selected words just apt to convey the idea is the beauty of this poem.
All the best.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
All the best on your new venture ..
The Feline thought ..is a wonderful idea..
Of course , their life is that of leisure..
Selected words just apt to convey the idea is the beauty of this poem.
All the best.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from foxangie123
Wonderful and what an amazing painting of a cat. Did you paint that. The poem that goes with is as magnificent as well. I love this.
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
Wonderful and what an amazing painting of a cat. Did you paint that. The poem that goes with is as magnificent as well. I love this.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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The cat pic is from Fanart and it is an amazing pic. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Jonadab Ezerie
I am very impressed with your work. It gives me the encouragement to improve my writing skill. Unique writing skills. Nice job Keep it up
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
I am very impressed with your work. It gives me the encouragement to improve my writing skill. Unique writing skills. Nice job Keep it up
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Keep writing and thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from terry drake
This seems to be written in free verse and there's no denying cats take life easy. I think the message you tell is common for most cats. The poem structure is solid and tight.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2016
This seems to be written in free verse and there's no denying cats take life easy. I think the message you tell is common for most cats. The poem structure is solid and tight.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 04-May-2016
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Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from William Ross
Nice little poem on your cat, great write, Good addition to you book. my cat loves the out doors always brings me treats Mice, and birds. Have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016
Nice little poem on your cat, great write, Good addition to you book. my cat loves the out doors always brings me treats Mice, and birds. Have a wonderful day
Comment Written 06-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Mark Schardine
Cats can seem to live lives of comfort, protected by generous humans. It does not take much, however, to cause their predatory instincts to kick in.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
Cats can seem to live lives of comfort, protected by generous humans. It does not take much, however, to cause their predatory instincts to kick in.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Yes, they do have those predatory instincts! Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
Cats do live the life of leisure, don't they? My cat expects us to obey all her wishes. We always worry over whether she likes the food or wants to get brushed. How more leisurely can you get than just to look at the window and see the birds. Life is indeed good. Delightful wording and good luck with the poem a day project! judi
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
Cats do live the life of leisure, don't they? My cat expects us to obey all her wishes. We always worry over whether she likes the food or wants to get brushed. How more leisurely can you get than just to look at the window and see the birds. Life is indeed good. Delightful wording and good luck with the poem a day project! judi
Comment Written 02-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Your kitty sounds like my five felines, life is all about food and adoration. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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My cat also sticks to a strict schedule, and she expects my husband and me to abide by it. judi
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I have three inside and 6 outside. I understand just what you are saying.
Treats and tuna are their whole world.
Very true and well done
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
I have three inside and 6 outside. I understand just what you are saying.
Treats and tuna are their whole world.
Very true and well done
Comment Written 02-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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You understand perfectly. I have five indoor kitties who live a life of luxary. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
How could anyone give this less than a six star review?! Love the picture you chose to accompany the piece and the words paint such a very live, and personal picture in the mind's eye of any feline owner. Very well written. Hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
How could anyone give this less than a six star review?! Love the picture you chose to accompany the piece and the words paint such a very live, and personal picture in the mind's eye of any feline owner. Very well written. Hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 02-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Again, I am honored by your generous amount of stars. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Mermaids,
If I could chose what to come back as when I die it would be a very happy pampered cat.
I could so easily spend my life eating good food and sleeping all day...wow what a life.
A lovely little poem and art work is cute.
Brenda
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
Hi Mermaids,
If I could chose what to come back as when I die it would be a very happy pampered cat.
I could so easily spend my life eating good food and sleeping all day...wow what a life.
A lovely little poem and art work is cute.
Brenda
Comment Written 02-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine