Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, one of my favorite birds sweet girl...they are so amazing in their beauty...and yes mother nature is wonderful in the circle of life...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...very well written...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thanks Linda..
I appreciate your review.
:- )Shirley

reply by l.raven on 01-Apr-2016

you are so welcome Shirley...xxoo Love

Comment from melyuki

Excellent

Hi Shirley thanks for sharing your Rictameter Poem and the author's notes to explain its form.. Delightful verse giving praise to the nurturing powers of mothers and their offspring. It's fascinating watching birds feed their chicks. I can imagine how amazing it would be to see such a large specimen bird taking care of her babies. Great picture to compliment your thoughts Shirley. Lovely verse and tribute to nature's wonderment.
Thanks for sharing and happy smiles to you, mel xxx

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2016

Thanks Mel.
I appreciate your time and review.
:-) Shirley

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

I admire writers who can do this type of poem. The lines fit together well. I hope you enjoyed writing it. Great description of nature. Hope you to see more of your writing.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thank you for reviewing.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good and nicely written and stated, A wonderfully written piece on mothers feeding their young. thanks for sharing the thoughts and have a great day.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thanks for reviewing.
I appreciate it.
:-) Shirley