Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

You brought up a good point about whether or not he heard you call his name. I believe he did. I was just talking about this with my friend yesterday. In the hospitals, they tell you to talk to a comatose person as though they can hear you, because hearing is the last thing that goes. When I had a recent accident, and was unconscious, I didn't know I was, because I could hear my husband calling 911, and I knew he was crying. It wasn't until I started trying to focus my eyes that I realized I hadn't been seeing anything.

So, I believe your son heard you, but only he knows for sure.

God Bless,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks again Ronda I hope with the Jason heard me yell out his name I knew something was wrong at that moment because he was a big kid 250 pounds and he was just laying gently against the driver who was actually trapped and had to be extracted with the jaws of life and here these kids lives and my kids are so you go figure God protected his side of the car there was no damage at all to his side of the car the windshield was intact the police report said Jason's head hits telephone pole which was not true his head hit the convertible tops and released it between that and being shaken off that crosses his problems thanks ever so much Ricky 1024 and also on another note I'm being for doing reviews so I can't move forward with this and put it on there where more people can see it because of the cool review I got last week from somebody who reviewed heat my all-time best poem he never died that was even on the welcome page saying it wasn't true and I ripped it apart and gave it to store so I defended myself and now I'm in bed so I just want you to realize like I'm telling everybody else that's reviewing and Jason's pieces are written that they can't be promoted and here he gave life and he has to end my work for him as they sit in the shadows instead of making the opening page for any of these last two pieces so if you could complain to Tommy ministrator about the cruelty of this and that the people that are cool and making the terrible reviews should be punished not the people who who are credited writers in and rejected thoughts and go back on their personal work and let them have a taste of their medicine Ricky Rick

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 29-Mar-2016

I've had some of those nasty reviews, too. We all have. I know it's hard to do, but try not to let it get to you. Some of them have made me cry, and they've chased many good people off here. The best you can do is block them from being able to see your work any more. Just go to their profile, and press the "mute" button. Also, report them to Tom. Just keep putting your message out there, and ignore the bullies.

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Thanks dear.
Ricky...

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

very good right I always feel your pain in everything you write God blessed Jay to have someone like you in his life. he was a gift for you. but gone to soon

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks ever so much Abby for this appreciation of Jason today is March 29th tomorrow Wednesday March 30th at 8:01 p.m. that he would have been in the accident irreversible brain damage flown by helicopter to Atlantic City Medical Center Atlantic City New Jersey had a heart attack on the way thank God they revived him cuz his heart and lungs is now existing and shows his left kidney in an unknown now 22 year old female from South Jersey his right kidney and a man named Bill out west who's wife divorced him as he was dying and stole all his assets and his daughter now takes care of him thank God and last but not least delivery recipients who passed away but had two years of life and I say these things in the name of Jesus Christ amen and be sure to mention to the administration I'm telling all my friends to block me from doing reviews because my one my one piece about Jason still being alive was butchered by some guy said it was a crock of crap basically so I gave it a fact on full blast and he complained the time and they block me from doing reviews so I can't promote any of my work so be sure to complain to Tom I'm having all my friends to review my work there's about 30 of them some more the top three in their categories thanks Ricky 1024

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 29-Mar-2016

oh my god you gave me goose bumps my dad was three days from dying april 26,2014 and at the last min of what we thought was the end. some one from new York city had passed away and the liver became available its been almost two years and God has gave him a second chance at lfe people like you astound me in your own heart you knew it was right. my dads donor we do not know we been trying to find out .you are one amazing HUMAN BEING we need more people like you. i'm sure all were greatfull in your pain of jay's death . nobody will ever forget about you who gave second chances

Comment from marzipan

Excellent

What a sad true story and how cruel this destiny or fate is. It will take such grace and love to help this mother have peace. What a brave woman to write this. The creative grammar went well with the sentiment of the work as it made me feel that nothing would matter, no grammar etc as all is unravelling and insanity. I think with the title of your book the reader will be led to feel some hope as you finish with the hope of heaven and seeing the child again. Of all the things we fear in life car accidents are the most likely and how brutal. God bless you and fill you with peace and hope and others as you continue your honest and open hearted journey. Thanks for your voice.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks for your time and review marzipan in a heartbeat that's a pretty sesing Jason's death on April 1st 2003 he is an organ tissue donor that of course as I mentioned in some of my work so I'm not sure if I mentioned it mentioned it in here three out of four people still alive 13 years later the the most amazing thing is he knew so much he was a percussionist he was wanted to be on a mechanic before you life and stop short and then PC for people's lives 3 still alive today in the name of this band was four ways to save on a second thought I've been banned here on doing reviews and promoting my work because my previous piece I posted a few days ago which was actually about 2 weeks ago I promoted all time best somebody butchered it so I gave it back to him and then they complain that song administrator so he banned me from doing reviews to carry my work forward so I'd appreciate you telling all 30 my friends to complain to him I have Dean coach Lavinia mermaids Liberty Justice all these wonderful writers are going to complain the cruelty that goes on in this segment and then the ignorance of the way it's reviewed and run when it comes to reviews by new Walters on this site they are so jealous that they put your people's works is amazing that person should be banned and kicked off the site instead of messing around with the writers have been here for years plus that are their ranks thanks for this Ricky 1024

reply by marzipan on 29-Mar-2016

Show me where to complain about your ban. I guess they want literature and if someone criticised you harshly it nmay have been due to grammar . I believe writing is about communication and for good reasons people can write freely without the grammar police getting onto them. BRAVE WRITING SHOULD BE ENCOURAGED :) Forward this message in your support. I do believe that writers and reviewers should be kept safe from harsh criticism and there may be a complaints procedure to follow if someone gives an unjust or unkind review. We are all learners and need kindness. Cheers for Marzi