Dead Wait.
You get what you pay for36 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Funny poem. I liked the imagery that helped lead up to the climax. Great rhythm and flow. I truly enjoyed your poem. Both funny and clever. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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Funny poem. I liked the imagery that helped lead up to the climax. Great rhythm and flow. I truly enjoyed your poem. Both funny and clever. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind review and the 6 stars. Your comments are really appreciated. Best regards Linda.
Comment from royowen
A rhyming verse in fourteen syllable lines in qatrained aabb rhyme, brilliant narrative that scans well and generally even tempoed. The text is cover with an hilarious delivery that is super funny, and extremely witty, this lifted my spirits and told me to enjoy my life today, because I might be tomorrow's joke, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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A rhyming verse in fourteen syllable lines in qatrained aabb rhyme, brilliant narrative that scans well and generally even tempoed. The text is cover with an hilarious delivery that is super funny, and extremely witty, this lifted my spirits and told me to enjoy my life today, because I might be tomorrow's joke, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Your comments are really appreciated. Best regards Linda.
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Most welcome
Comment from Joyce Long
Your cup says it all. This is very cute and really paints a picture. My husband works part time for a local funeral home. Thank goodness, he has never had the problem of miss placing the plot for burial. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 03-28-16
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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Your cup says it all. This is very cute and really paints a picture. My husband works part time for a local funeral home. Thank goodness, he has never had the problem of miss placing the plot for burial. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 03-28-16
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind review. Your comments are really appreciated. Best regards Linda.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Linda
= This was such a cute story poem.
= Love the artwork ... perfect!
= Well written and presented.
<> FanStory gremlin ... they run amuck sometimes. (*<*)
= Today Fitch stood by Nelly[�]´s grave and
* A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! *
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi, Linda
= This was such a cute story poem.
= Love the artwork ... perfect!
= Well written and presented.
<> FanStory gremlin ... they run amuck sometimes. (*<*)
= Today Fitch stood by Nelly[�]´s grave and
* A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! *
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Thank you Jax for your kind review and for pointing out the gremlin. Thanks to you all is now well. Best regards Linda.
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= Yeah, you have to watch out for those little critters.
= Especially in the author's notes -- they will run amuck. (*<*)
Comment from William Ross
a witty and fun take on you get what you pay for, good rhyming and rhythm. reads great. thanks for sharing the humor and wit. have a great day.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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a witty and fun take on you get what you pay for, good rhyming and rhythm. reads great. thanks for sharing the humor and wit. have a great day.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Thank you William for your kind review. I really appreciate your comments. Best regards Linda.
Comment from fastdigits
A raucous tale on a subject not
meant for humor, but which you
have artistically turned into
a light-hearted poetic journey
down the road of laughter as
each line of your procession
makes its way down the page.
Well done
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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A raucous tale on a subject not
meant for humor, but which you
have artistically turned into
a light-hearted poetic journey
down the road of laughter as
each line of your procession
makes its way down the page.
Well done
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I really appreciate your comments. Best regards Linda.
