Dead Wait.
You get what you pay for36 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I like this snarky, smarmy, sarcastic look at the business of funeral homes. I like the style, the wit, the humor, and even a bit of horror thrown in for good measure. Bravo all around.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I like this snarky, smarmy, sarcastic look at the business of funeral homes. I like the style, the wit, the humor, and even a bit of horror thrown in for good measure. Bravo all around.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you Jake for your kind review.
Comment from RGstar
Well, this was different. I have not learned how to conquer my fear of death, yet. I hope I will be able to one day.
Whoever reads this with a smile surely have conquered theirs.
Almost in a limerick fashion, there are arts to smile at.
Wishing you good luck with this one.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Well, this was different. I have not learned how to conquer my fear of death, yet. I hope I will be able to one day.
Whoever reads this with a smile surely have conquered theirs.
Almost in a limerick fashion, there are arts to smile at.
Wishing you good luck with this one.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from zanya
Yes a sense of humor evoked here in these stanzas to help lighten the mood around the topic of funerals and burials -humor can break out anywhere ! well done
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Yes a sense of humor evoked here in these stanzas to help lighten the mood around the topic of funerals and burials -humor can break out anywhere ! well done
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind review Zanya. X
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was different and interesting. It was great to read. It has humor.
Keep up the great writing. I wish you the best. Stay safe. And good luck
in your future post.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This was different and interesting. It was great to read. It has humor.
Keep up the great writing. I wish you the best. Stay safe. And good luck
in your future post.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you Carolyn. X
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Did I enjoy it yeah Was a captivating year Couldn't could the writer do more yeah But this is up there towards brilliant yeah thanks again my friend for sharing
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Did I enjoy it yeah Was a captivating year Couldn't could the writer do more yeah But this is up there towards brilliant yeah thanks again my friend for sharing
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading. X
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You're welcome
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. The subject matter was a little creepy for me but you did a good job with painting a picture. I especially love the image you selected and how true is the message .
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The subject matter was a little creepy for me but you did a good job with painting a picture. I especially love the image you selected and how true is the message .
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank You for reviewing my poem. X
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Dead Wait'. is an exceptionally well-written and hoot of a piece. This talented poet's offering was delightful to read and review. I apologize, but
I think my computer's about to blow up !! I'm looking forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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'Dead Wait'. is an exceptionally well-written and hoot of a piece. This talented poet's offering was delightful to read and review. I apologize, but
I think my computer's about to blow up !! I'm looking forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Makes it all worthwhile. X
You certainly deserved the kind review.
Comment from Thatguypk
Oh dear, this really does appeal to my sense of humour. Very good. It also puts me in mind of the wonderful funeral sketches that the Irish comedian Dave Allen used to present and perform in. Black comedy at its best. This was such fun.
PK
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Oh dear, this really does appeal to my sense of humour. Very good. It also puts me in mind of the wonderful funeral sketches that the Irish comedian Dave Allen used to present and perform in. Black comedy at its best. This was such fun.
PK
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you fo the comparison to Dave Allen, what a wonderful compliment, accompanied by 6 stars. Over the moon. X
Comment from LisaMay
Virtual 6 for this one!
I cracked up laughing with your irreverent poem, right from the start with the words in that illustration photo of the mug. Your poem is decidedly funny and carries the reader through the tale with excellent rhyming as we follow the procession around looking for the burial plot for their cheap funeral.
I love puns and appreciate your title: Dead Wait is inspired.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Virtual 6 for this one!
I cracked up laughing with your irreverent poem, right from the start with the words in that illustration photo of the mug. Your poem is decidedly funny and carries the reader through the tale with excellent rhyming as we follow the procession around looking for the burial plot for their cheap funeral.
I love puns and appreciate your title: Dead Wait is inspired.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you Lisa. I'm thrilled with your complimentary review. X
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Fucking awesome.
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Ha ha well put Lisa. X
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Did you ever know where you were going before writing anything down?
I wonder if many writers do, especially poets. Novelists must have a sketch of some sort but poets? Who knows?
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Did you ever know where you were going before writing anything down?
I wonder if many writers do, especially poets. Novelists must have a sketch of some sort but poets? Who knows?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reviewing. X
