Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Teri,

A great poem as Easter approaches. For He came into this world to promote peace and love between one another.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank you for the great review. Teri

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

What a nice little Septolet. It's been awhile since I've seen one posted, so it was a double delight today. This poem would make a very nice addition to a book dedicated to faith and to the love of Jesus.
Rose.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank you for the great review my friend. hugs, Teri

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

New to poetry and its many forms and structures, I'm for to trust my ears and eyes to find what interests and touches me. I like the shorter styles that say so much with so few words. :-)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank you for the review. Teri

Comment from Nan Beeson

Excellent

Good morning, Teri: Re your Septolet poem, "Light from Jesus," I never heard of one before, but I like the way it looks before I read it, lol!

His
light shines
with his love
for all to see
Coming back
so soon
peace

Oh.... It is so precious and true and uplifting, Teri.
So wonderful to read first thing this morning. If this
is what your nephew inspires you to write, perhaps you should babysit him more often lol!

Hugs,
Nan:))

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

lol We babysit him Mon thru Friday. He is a true little blessing with a great big smile. love, Teri

reply by Nan Beeson on 23-Mar-2016

Awww.... How fortunate you are, and his parents too, lol! to know tht he is loved and taken well care of while they are at work, etc. A blessings on both sides that makes it very balanced and blessed!

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2016

I know that I am truly blessed. hugs, teri

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Teri. Right on with syllables.
I'm so thankful for His love.
We hope He comes soon. This world is in a scary condition

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016

Thank you for the great review. Hugs, Teri

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I like your Septolet. Yes, he will be coming back on Sunday (Easter) the most important day of the liturgical calendar. His light will truly shine on that day, especially. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016

Thank you for the great review. Teri

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Teri,

This is a strong and beautifully written Septolet poem. I have never tried it
and I'm happy you did because it's a great gift for believers. Very well done
on this.

Linda

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016

Thank you my friend for the great review. Hugs, Teri

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I see nothing wrong with this poem. You did a good job. It's so hard to say so much in so few words. You did it!

I love the theme, that Jesus is coming again. I never doubt it for a moment, but it's nice to be reminded. 8-)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016

Thank you for the great review. I am so happy I know Him. Hugs, Teri

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Jesus has promise to be with his followers, and to guard and protect them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016

Thank you Charlie for the great review. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs, teri

reply by c_lucas on 23-Mar-2016

You're Welcome, Teri. Charlie

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

So very nicely done. A real lift from the heart wrenching work. This reads hope and faith to me. It is immaculate and wish I had exceptional for you.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016

Thank you my friend for the great review. hugs, Teri