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"The Book of Jay 1984 to 2003"

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My Son Jason's Life.

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Comment from AnnieDawn
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This is one story that I want to keep tabs on. I am so interested in what you are doing with this. I would be interested in perusing the whole story as it emerges and keeping it in my bookcase if I am sure of its purpose. The loss of a child through an untimely death remains raw and an open wound in the heart even after 19 years and that is why I am interested in the way you are handling your loss. I admire your ingenuity. Good job.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
    it's not an engineer with a it's not grief it's not pain it's not depression it's not any of those things a combination of those things what it is is maternal powered four started at the age of only a child when I knew then if you're watching a movie in a theater in Pitman New Jersey to Jason Argonauts that I wanted my own very own Jason of the Argonauts my hero I wanted a son that I could look up to that I could mold and shape and give him all my positive things not any and my negative only my positive and then let him that gift do what he was meant to do and he did exactly that he Not only was a guardian angel he was a peer mediator in 6th grade out of the three teachers principal vice-principal superintendent sent all of the problem child to Jason he could sit down and talk to somebody and you can feel a calming presence he would say it's ok and they would believe that then later on as he started to grow from only a two year old very religious child in a diaper and living in his own world going around saying holy Crackle turned into a percussionist if he was a basketball player who was overweight and could not dribble the ball but was put in the shoot threes to save the game and win the championship they went from losing every game that previous year to winning every game that's why he was the only one that got to Trophies to becoming a percussionist working on becoming a mechanic finally found his girlfriend and her name was Angel just like him until the tragedy happened and then had to begin he had to Die to Save for others that is why when I contacted ABC Studios about my mission Wake up shake up and I want to present the book The Gift of Life sitting so long I wanted to go on Oprah and do this and then I finally started piecing it all together mapping out in my mind the events trying to figure out what has happened here the clues were left behind a picture taken only 20 minutes before that fateful accident when Jason will be irreversibly brain damaged and 17 hours later a vegetable trying to form a heart and his two hands as my daughter my granddaughter so she sat on his lap with her arm stretched out of the biggest smile the world showing the world that my Uncle Jason is an angel and I know and nobody else knows it nobody else knew and I didn't even know my son was an angel why was blind and then my eyes open and then I finally realized the name of the band for ways to save has meaning to besides the picture for his Epitaph he saved for people's lives and 2003 Chase got his heart and lungs still got one kidney and unknown female who was only a child got the left kidney and back wife and tell her when she was practically dead according to the Laura S heredity LSW of The Gift of Life in Philadelphia the fourth one got delivered. Eight years later this is why the view is interested in me they're waiting for a letter the letters been written now for months I got in an accident October 11th and my leg broken and 6 places I wanted to November 5th to go on the show on his birthday I'm waiting for the next birthday I'll be 32 years oldhe passed you didn't even sign his license because at that age they don't have an idea or clue of deathly are indestructible beings that will live on forever and yes Jason will live on forever and as each of those people pass away only the unknown females now 22 has to give birth They carried on and that is why the tattoo I have the honor of my father my wife and my son has only Jason first on the ribbon on the other side is blank and I say these words in the name of Jesus Christ amen and watch for chapter 2 of The Book of Joe the first one was the memory box and second one coming up is going to talk about the story it's going to be called The Book of J it like Jason's ladder blue this site away got recognized they got all time best that will go on the front page position number one I will review for at least 6 hours straight and make sure it gets the recognition it deserves thank you Ricky 1024
Comment from Norm DePlume
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Ricky1024, I hesitate to grade this higher only for the fact that I am not fully aware of the story of "Jay"... However, for shear determination, dedication and heart - your score should be off the charts... I look forward to hearing and learning more about Jay in the very near future... So, whatever you do, do not stop spreading his legacy... ever!
Bobby.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
    Thanks,

    Ricky1024.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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A very nice prologue and introduction to you collection of works you've chosen to compile in your son's honor. What a very unselfish thing you have done to take your experiences and your pain, and share it with other people so we can be touched by his life.

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
    thank you very much longer in the world be to every day until April 1st when he gave his organs which is April 1st at 2016 will be 13 years since that happened in 2013 Ricky 1024
Comment from foxangie123
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Thank you for you. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for writing wisdom. Thank you for sharing your awful experience. Thank you for helping us grow from tragedy my dear friend.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
    and thank you Angie smooches baby fox Angel for helping me you and Arnie and Jason of course and now Eric and all the other ones they were kicking it here at lost their sons it's amazing what a how writers can come together on just one site and become a family Ricky 1024
reply by foxangie123 on 22-Mar-2016
    Am I included in the family here? Smooches.