To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Shaded Differently"Poems by Michael
17 total reviews
Comment from Natalie Walker
This is great. I like the use of minimal punctuation, it adds to the impactful simplicity of the poem. The imagery is great, too. I noticed no errors. Nice work!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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This is great. I like the use of minimal punctuation, it adds to the impactful simplicity of the poem. The imagery is great, too. I noticed no errors. Nice work!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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Hi Natalie...-smile-
I thank you kindly Maam...appreciate you enjoying and stopping by to tell me. love michael
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I see you were raised in a great state. Michigan has always been my home. As far as I am concerned, there is no place lovelier than Michigan. Anyhow, this is a beautiful poem. I love the artwork. Good job.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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Excellent. I see you were raised in a great state. Michigan has always been my home. As far as I am concerned, there is no place lovelier than Michigan. Anyhow, this is a beautiful poem. I love the artwork. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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ha...-smile-...i was born in Detriot General. grew up in Sterling Heights for JR and high school years. 19 and Scheiner. by Lakeside Mall. yea, I miss it sometimes...Christmas usually...fall. thank you Pretty. love Michael
Comment from MSJVClarke
This was an interesting poem. I liked the soft tones and you topic of blue to the contrast of the great Monarch. You captured the title well in each stanza with your descriptive comparisons.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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This was an interesting poem. I liked the soft tones and you topic of blue to the contrast of the great Monarch. You captured the title well in each stanza with your descriptive comparisons.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
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Hi...-smile-
well thank you appreciate you enjoying. Always my pleasure. love Michael
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Michael,
This piece flows really well. Love the pic and the music! The following stanza is so perfect for your music association:
easy music soothsayer
all that jazz
billowed cotton dressed
azure clarifies you
open sky bluesy
mystery your way butterflies
Excellent work!
Kim
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Hi Michael,
This piece flows really well. Love the pic and the music! The following stanza is so perfect for your music association:
easy music soothsayer
all that jazz
billowed cotton dressed
azure clarifies you
open sky bluesy
mystery your way butterflies
Excellent work!
Kim
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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woo...-headwag-....thank you Kim....you're making me happy...keep it up and I'm a throw an allnighter....ahhaha....thank you Beautiful....love Michael
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, I'm glad I waited to read this...I like some of the changes you made...
I love you
like a father holds a daughter
cradled rock Christ
RGStar is right when he says you are unique in your own wording...
no others could write with such beauty...such feeling...
I love the wording in your poem...
thirsty drink waterfall
swoon does the swan beautiful
saturated wet in life
beautiful is the color blue...reminds me of Pam...
very nicely written...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2016
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Hi Michael, I'm glad I waited to read this...I like some of the changes you made...
I love you
like a father holds a daughter
cradled rock Christ
RGStar is right when he says you are unique in your own wording...
no others could write with such beauty...such feeling...
I love the wording in your poem...
thirsty drink waterfall
swoon does the swan beautiful
saturated wet in life
beautiful is the color blue...reminds me of Pam...
very nicely written...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2016
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why hello there Daffodil....splendid weather wouldn't you agree...? changes...? oh...yes, its called down sizing...-headshake-....I'm living on the roof of an abandoned Volkswagen van...its great...right...? of course Roy's right....he's a genius....-headtilt-....-smile-...Pam...? oh yes...colbolt....how could I forget...there was a dude who took that name here...who I didn't like very much. she just wouldn't shut up...colbolt this colbolt that...eeeEEEAAAHHHhhh....yea those were the days huh... ah cheer up kid. love you michael
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and it's still to chilly...I know you agree...and yes Roy is right...he knows talent when he reads it...yes those were the days...and I wish she were here...so cheer me up...and love ya too...xxoo
Comment from michaelcahill
Gee, I got a little behind, but I couldn't pass this bye. Oh yeah, I'm on board with this. Beautiful. Made me get out my guitar even. Major coolness and mood. Yes. mikey
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Gee, I got a little behind, but I couldn't pass this bye. Oh yeah, I'm on board with this. Beautiful. Made me get out my guitar even. Major coolness and mood. Yes. mikey
Comment Written 23-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Marshal Cahill, whats up Bro....-smile-
ah thank you man, just sorta found myself there listening to the music...appreciate the stop by. love Michael
Comment from MoniqueMarie
Miles Davis...Hugh Masakela...Stanley Turentine..Billie Holiday..The Blues ..and all that jazz..This is very soothing and your poetry is full of symbolism and delightful imagery. 130 people have listened? Butterflies..shades of blue metamorphosis.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Miles Davis...Hugh Masakela...Stanley Turentine..Billie Holiday..The Blues ..and all that jazz..This is very soothing and your poetry is full of symbolism and delightful imagery. 130 people have listened? Butterflies..shades of blue metamorphosis.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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thank you...-smile-
appreciate the review and say so. love Michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Michael, this is so beautiful, my dear friend. So much of it is pure poetry. Azure skies, butterflies, (sigh) waterfalls, swans, saturated wet with life...(magical) I love you...Like a father holds a daughter...Oh, Michael that is precious. The background of music sets it perfectly. Michael, this is my type of poem, my way of thinking. I just love it. I have another of your poems in my bookcase, a special one, this one will go with it. I love you, my special friend. Sandy. xxx
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Hi Michael, this is so beautiful, my dear friend. So much of it is pure poetry. Azure skies, butterflies, (sigh) waterfalls, swans, saturated wet with life...(magical) I love you...Like a father holds a daughter...Oh, Michael that is precious. The background of music sets it perfectly. Michael, this is my type of poem, my way of thinking. I just love it. I have another of your poems in my bookcase, a special one, this one will go with it. I love you, my special friend. Sandy. xxx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Hi Sandy...-smile-
thank you for confirming the worth of my world words.
it always made me feel special that you did. Love you to sweetheart, hope you're in a happy place. love michael
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Happy as happy is. Your words are always of much worth, Michael, even though I don't always understand them, I know they come from deep within you. I hope you are really happy, my dear Michael. :) xxx
Comment from babyross
You swooned me with this jazzy taste and it was sweet. Pulling out the old greats was an added touch to this piece, it dances with a slow swing, capturing the jazz lover's ear. So nice of you to grace us with a fine tune of written artistry. Although a deserving six, I have to grace it with five and my own added plus. Thanks for the mood!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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You swooned me with this jazzy taste and it was sweet. Pulling out the old greats was an added touch to this piece, it dances with a slow swing, capturing the jazz lover's ear. So nice of you to grace us with a fine tune of written artistry. Although a deserving six, I have to grace it with five and my own added plus. Thanks for the mood!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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ha...-smile-...well thank you...you made me happy all the sudden...I love it when that happens. love Michael
Comment from RGstar
Your notebook form, reverse syntax is to be admired if taken the time to understand and delve into what you are saying. I always ready myself with anticipation when opening your work, for I know I will get something different with a deeper meaning. I relish the challenge.
This may seem to some that the syntax is not as it should be, but I know different as I, by now, am familiar with the style...and it is by far , your own...something all authors should aspire to.
A strong sense of blue in this one, the colour so important, both for the theme and mood of the work. I like the way you have incorporated Jazz and its players in strengthening the tone and mood of the ''blues''
You have my six stars, my friend.
Have a great Sunday.
My best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Your notebook form, reverse syntax is to be admired if taken the time to understand and delve into what you are saying. I always ready myself with anticipation when opening your work, for I know I will get something different with a deeper meaning. I relish the challenge.
This may seem to some that the syntax is not as it should be, but I know different as I, by now, am familiar with the style...and it is by far , your own...something all authors should aspire to.
A strong sense of blue in this one, the colour so important, both for the theme and mood of the work. I like the way you have incorporated Jazz and its players in strengthening the tone and mood of the ''blues''
You have my six stars, my friend.
Have a great Sunday.
My best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Hey Roy...good evening to you Sir...-smile-
ah I don't know about all that syntax stuff...I just write the way it feels...but your acknowledgement and interest feels powerful wow. you're poetry man. love michael
