Seth Sloth
A Peach Picking Sloth29 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
This is the first poem I have read about a sloth. Your use of words makes your poem fun to pronounce out loud. I admire your ability to use only the letter S and P words. Congrats on winning the contest.
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This is the first poem I have read about a sloth. Your use of words makes your poem fun to pronounce out loud. I admire your ability to use only the letter S and P words. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from GeraldS
Congratulations on your win. This is a nicely penned poem enhanced with very appropriate artwork. There were a lot of good entries in this contest, so you can be proud that yours rose to the top.
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Congratulations on your win. This is a nicely penned poem enhanced with very appropriate artwork. There were a lot of good entries in this contest, so you can be proud that yours rose to the top.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from Loumon
I love it. Tongue twister all around. You've fully captured my imagination, I'm visualizing Seth Sloth , s-l-o-w-l-y making his way through the process of picking those peaches.
You've managed to do all this within the confines of 5-7-5.
Awesome.
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I love it. Tongue twister all around. You've fully captured my imagination, I'm visualizing Seth Sloth , s-l-o-w-l-y making his way through the process of picking those peaches.
You've managed to do all this within the confines of 5-7-5.
Awesome.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from RGstar
The family of words bodes well, yet there must still be strength in meaning...you certainly have that here.
Good luck in the contest,
RGstar
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The family of words bodes well, yet there must still be strength in meaning...you certainly have that here.
Good luck in the contest,
RGstar
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
A tongue twister of Peter Piper proportions. I once wrote a song called the pheasant plucker, that proved quite difficult to sing. This, though less potentially rude is still awkward vto recite correctly without a slip of tongue or lip.
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A tongue twister of Peter Piper proportions. I once wrote a song called the pheasant plucker, that proved quite difficult to sing. This, though less potentially rude is still awkward vto recite correctly without a slip of tongue or lip.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from RYME4U
I like trhe originality of this 5-7-5 poem. You have used the description of this rare jungle aninalvery well. I like the alliterative lines. Good job!
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I like trhe originality of this 5-7-5 poem. You have used the description of this rare jungle aninalvery well. I like the alliterative lines. Good job!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from c_lucas
Being from the state of Georgia, I have did my share of picking peaches. If I ever ran across this character I would have chosen another tree. This is well written.
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Being from the state of Georgia, I have did my share of picking peaches. If I ever ran across this character I would have chosen another tree. This is well written.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
Comment from CD Richards
Amazingly appropriate alliteration.
This is a lot of fun, and in so far as I can see meets all the requirements. The only thing I question is why you've capitalised every word. I guess there's no law against it, it just looks unfamiliar to me.
Very nicely done, it should do well in the contest.
Craig
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Amazingly appropriate alliteration.
This is a lot of fun, and in so far as I can see meets all the requirements. The only thing I question is why you've capitalised every word. I guess there's no law against it, it just looks unfamiliar to me.
Very nicely done, it should do well in the contest.
Craig
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
Comment from LIJ Red
Or, as Seth said after a particularly large peach, "This is the pits."
Five, seven, five, check. Humorous, check. Excellent, check. Good luck.
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Or, as Seth said after a particularly large peach, "This is the pits."
Five, seven, five, check. Humorous, check. Excellent, check. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
Comment from wiljacro
Hi! I enjoyed your alliterative 5-7-5 mostly because of it's one off the wall type of poem which always raises a smile as far as I'm concerned. Thanks for the grin. wiljacro.
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Hi! I enjoyed your alliterative 5-7-5 mostly because of it's one off the wall type of poem which always raises a smile as far as I'm concerned. Thanks for the grin. wiljacro.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
