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Assorted poetry

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Comment from Rosalyne
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Hi, Bill.
Your poem is beautiful and shares how special and precious a child is. They bring such joy and as you said so well, "the meaning of existence." Perfect picture to accompany your poem.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
    Thank you, Rosalyne, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from frogbook
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Love this one Bill. It is beautiful and so well stated in these few words. Excellent art and presentation. This is a great work.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
    Thank you, fb, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Stephanie Kastner
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So true! There is nothing like seeing the promise of the future in the sweetness of a tiny child. If we could just hang onto that purity! When I became a mother, I understood the importance of our existence!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
    Thank you, Stephanie, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A tiny little hand with perfect fivevlittke fingers, that is a wonderful experience to measure that tiny hand against your own. A wobderful creator we have.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
    Thank you, Sandra, for the excellent review. Bill