Christine's Poems
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Comment from Domino 2
I agree a soul has 'nothing to do with religion' - certainly not any PARTICULAR one, as otherwise, all other souls who didn't have a particular belief would apparently be damned, according to some zealots and nasty extremists.
II also believe it is our 'essence', and an individual indestructive entity that 'lives' on in a form I'm not sure of, but I hope a better and more enlightened existence than it experiences in life's human (or maybe other animal) forms.
Excellent views on the theme.
Best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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I agree a soul has 'nothing to do with religion' - certainly not any PARTICULAR one, as otherwise, all other souls who didn't have a particular belief would apparently be damned, according to some zealots and nasty extremists.
II also believe it is our 'essence', and an individual indestructive entity that 'lives' on in a form I'm not sure of, but I hope a better and more enlightened existence than it experiences in life's human (or maybe other animal) forms.
Excellent views on the theme.
Best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Hi Ray, Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my prose on the Soul, and your comments are truely appreciated and I am glad you think in a similar vein as myself. Many Cheers
Comment from foxangie123
I love her artwork. This pic is amazing as are the words you wrote as to the soul and what that means. I entered it too and this puts mine to shame. Great work...
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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I love her artwork. This pic is amazing as are the words you wrote as to the soul and what that means. I entered it too and this puts mine to shame. Great work...
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Hi foxangie123, Thank you for your review and lovely words, and please don't ever put your work down, I am sure it is great and I look forward to reading it also. We all write form our heart and soul and I appreciate your support Cheers. Yes the artwork is lovely.
Comment from c_lucas
The physical body is the vehicle. The soul is the driver. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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The physical body is the vehicle. The soul is the driver. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016
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Hi c lucas, Thanks for your review, and that sums it up nicely. I am glad you enjoyed the read and Cheers for your good luck message
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You're welcome,
Comment from scd41
There are many opinions about the role of soul. Your essay expresses clearly your views on the subject. I have different views like soul is immortal and souls are all same. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading your essay. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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There are many opinions about the role of soul. Your essay expresses clearly your views on the subject. I have different views like soul is immortal and souls are all same. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading your essay. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Thanks scd41. Thanks for reading my Soul prose, Yes I guess we arecall different in out thoughts and opinions but I think we often connect through our Soul also. Manyy Cheers for your comments
Comment from DonandVicki
The only issue that I have is this being classified as fiction. I suppose you could go either way with it ,however I have always believed ed the soul to be non-fiction.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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The only issue that I have is this being classified as fiction. I suppose you could go either way with it ,however I have always believed ed the soul to be non-fiction.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi DonandVick, Thanks for your review and excellent rating for my soul piece. I hadn't thought of a soul being fiction or non fiction but just is. good point to ponder. Cheers for a great day
Comment from Scarbrems
I thought this was quite beautiful and poetic, even though it is prose. Lovely writing. Only one nit. 'Oppresion' - 'Oppression'. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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I thought this was quite beautiful and poetic, even though it is prose. Lovely writing. Only one nit. 'Oppresion' - 'Oppression'. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi Sarkems, I thank you very much for your lovely review and comments for my Soul prose. Also thanks for picking up the spelling, I have corrected this now. Many Cheers to you
Comment from RPSaxena
Dear Friend,
The body and soul have been intermingled here. As a matter of fact, they are poles apart by nature. The former leads us to materialistic world and its bad side-effects while the latter always tries to take us to the spiritualistic and virtuous life. We find all kinds of evils in the world because we often remain oblivious to our soul. Hence, let's follow our soul and each of us must be able to say: 'I am my soul.'
"The soul is our teacher,...........through our unique existence." Upon death our soul gets released into infinity. It's my opinion.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Dear Friend,
The body and soul have been intermingled here. As a matter of fact, they are poles apart by nature. The former leads us to materialistic world and its bad side-effects while the latter always tries to take us to the spiritualistic and virtuous life. We find all kinds of evils in the world because we often remain oblivious to our soul. Hence, let's follow our soul and each of us must be able to say: 'I am my soul.'
"The soul is our teacher,...........through our unique existence." Upon death our soul gets released into infinity. It's my opinion.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi RPSaxena, Thank you for reading and reviewing my Soul prose, for you thoughts on this interesting subject. I think many people have quite differing opinions re the Soul and what it represents, so pleased to hear your view also Cheers for your good luck message too.
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Hi Friend, I was thinking that you might be offended, but I'm highly impressed with your such a nice response and maturity of judgment. With best wishes ~RP.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry into the Soul Writer writing prompt contest. Your piece reads clearly and offers a very interesting theory as to who we are and how we operate through our soul. If only everyone had such a realization it may bring more harmony to this world. I enjoyed reading this most thought provoking piece.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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This is a good entry into the Soul Writer writing prompt contest. Your piece reads clearly and offers a very interesting theory as to who we are and how we operate through our soul. If only everyone had such a realization it may bring more harmony to this world. I enjoyed reading this most thought provoking piece.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi PoemsOfDD, I am pleased your thought my Soul piece was a good entryand that your enjoyed reading this. I hope to provoke the reader to think about what the soul means to them . Many thanks and Chhers for your review
Comment from Mick-ster
I like the view point that the soul is separate from religions but I don't know if I believe in souls myself. I think people have a sort of energy to them and the energy we put out into the world will eventually come back to us in some way. I don't know if I am really supposed to share my view or just write a review.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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I like the view point that the soul is separate from religions but I don't know if I believe in souls myself. I think people have a sort of energy to them and the energy we put out into the world will eventually come back to us in some way. I don't know if I am really supposed to share my view or just write a review.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi Mick-ster, Of course you can share your view and I also thank you for your review and comments. The energy is the soul too. Many Cheers for a good day
Comment from Sambangi
First, I liked the title "I'm my soul". It is a fact. The definition of soul slightly varies from religion to religion, but basically it describes who I'm. Body may die but soul doesn't have death, fire can not burn it. Very well written piece. All the best
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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First, I liked the title "I'm my soul". It is a fact. The definition of soul slightly varies from religion to religion, but basically it describes who I'm. Body may die but soul doesn't have death, fire can not burn it. Very well written piece. All the best
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Thank you Sambangi, for your lovely review and rating for my piece for this prompt. Cheers for you best wishes too I am pleased you thought it very well written.