More Work Than Fun
Title says it all15 total reviews
Comment from TallySally
Poor puppy! Sometimes winning becomes the 'be all' and 'end all' - and you saidit so well!
Very good job.
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Poor puppy! Sometimes winning becomes the 'be all' and 'end all' - and you saidit so well!
Very good job.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much! 8-)
Comment from William Ross
Nice, great job how true sometimes to fight for the top sometimes takes the fun out of it. great job and good luck. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Nice, great job how true sometimes to fight for the top sometimes takes the fun out of it. great job and good luck. Have a great day.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Thank you. I appreciate your opinion.
Comment from Kaydoe
In a few words I believe you are stating that one often strives to be on the top of his job, at the expense of rest, and the enjoyment of life. The cartoon depicts the dog with a distressed look and a trophy on its side. No Joy or happiness.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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In a few words I believe you are stating that one often strives to be on the top of his job, at the expense of rest, and the enjoyment of life. The cartoon depicts the dog with a distressed look and a trophy on its side. No Joy or happiness.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Yes. I hope you like it.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Yup. I think you've got it covered. :-D You make Teacup Dictionary look easy! Very cute poem. Flows well. Great choice of artwork. I would recommend this poem to anyone.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Yup. I think you've got it covered. :-D You make Teacup Dictionary look easy! Very cute poem. Flows well. Great choice of artwork. I would recommend this poem to anyone.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review. 8-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from seaglass
This poem describes the determination of a committed competitor. Some are driven to the max where rest or relaxation can not be considered. The picture is a good match.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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This poem describes the determination of a committed competitor. Some are driven to the max where rest or relaxation can not be considered. The picture is a good match.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Thank you. 8-)
Comment from trumby
This is indeed very true. It happens in real life. Because we strive to be the best, we forgot to have fun in what we are doing. Wonderful entry to this contest. All the best.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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This is indeed very true. It happens in real life. Because we strive to be the best, we forgot to have fun in what we are doing. Wonderful entry to this contest. All the best.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Thank you. I don't why I keep entering. I never win. 8-)
Comment from dmt1967
This is funny. Am I right in thinking this poem is aimed at the writers on here that take these contests a bit too seriously lol. Great poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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This is funny. Am I right in thinking this poem is aimed at the writers on here that take these contests a bit too seriously lol. Great poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Who's to say? I was only have fun putting words together. 8-)
Comment from chasennov
Title says it all. More Work Than Fun.' Surely, when writing is no longer fun one should retire from it. But who can even do that? We just have to keep going, come what may. I quite enjoyed your cute little poem you created. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Title says it all. More Work Than Fun.' Surely, when writing is no longer fun one should retire from it. But who can even do that? We just have to keep going, come what may. I quite enjoyed your cute little poem you created. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Thank you. I thought at first you were going to chastise me. Some have. I really appreciate your kind words.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from royowen
Well done my friend, just a little short, but absolutely nothing wrong with it, the thrust of the work, you made your point, articulately, succinctly and well, great attempt, it's not easy launching, my support is yours, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Well done my friend, just a little short, but absolutely nothing wrong with it, the thrust of the work, you made your point, articulately, succinctly and well, great attempt, it's not easy launching, my support is yours, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Bless your heart! And I thank you.
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Most welcome
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Thank you so very much! What a good friend you are. 8-)
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Most welcome
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My pleasure always
Comment from AnnaLinda
Author,
Mmm....it sure did not take many words to make your point here.
You seemed to have captured the true spirit of competition if
you happen to be referring to the site here...with rankings,
ratings, fan accumulation and so forth.
Nice artwork choice with the beat dog holding a trophy.
Kind of a pity, isn't it?
Well done,
Linda
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Author,
Mmm....it sure did not take many words to make your point here.
You seemed to have captured the true spirit of competition if
you happen to be referring to the site here...with rankings,
ratings, fan accumulation and so forth.
Nice artwork choice with the beat dog holding a trophy.
Kind of a pity, isn't it?
Well done,
Linda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Thank you. Someone else asked if I was referring to this site. I answered, "Who's to say?" 8-)