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A Wordsmith Entry - I'm sorry

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Comment from Leineco
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Maybe not with a bazooka - but maybe with a high powered water blaster! I think shooting was the right reaction to this barely manageable list of clearly unaligned words!!!!

And yet, you managed to entertain me quite nicely, evoking a giggle or two along the way :-)

Qudos for having more patience and tenacity than I would have been able to muster up!! :-)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
    that's the hardest thing I've ever had to do. LOL thanks for the grand review.
Comment from Chrissy710
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Very well written and you have incorporated your words well to make a fun poem and I could see your eyes rollling when receiving these words. ( mine did) yes you managed .Antiparliamentarian extremely well in that stanza LOL . A great challenge piece .good luck Cheers Christineð???

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    For sure, how much time did he spend in that dictionary anyway? Thanks for the great review.
reply by Chrissy710 on 03-Feb-2016
    Too long LOL. but made OUR brains work I think HaHa
Comment from I am Cat
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Dawn! I'm cracking up... that's hilarious! LOLOL
Too funny, girl! ;)
I thought, at first, he had given you antidisestablishmentarianism... yes, yes it could be worse! LOL
Wow. this made me laugh. There is rhyme, though it tends to be switch-0 change-0... which is alright-y-o with me-o my-o ;)
well done Dawn!
Good luck in the contest!
woot
this was fun!
Cat

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
    That is the hardest thing I've ever had to write. LOL I'm lucky the rhyme had any kind of anything. Those words were as crazy as the ones he gave you. Could have been worse could have been that word you use above, which I get tongue tied on. Thanks for the great response.
reply by I am Cat on 03-Feb-2016
    lol, right? He was smoking something for sure. LOL
reply by I am Cat on 03-Feb-2016
    lol, right? He was smoking something for sure. LOL
Comment from Domino 2
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You've certainly used the required words to good effect in this silly (in the best way) 'wacky road' write, Dawn.

Who needs 'the ground' when we have 'cotton candy clouds ' to rest our heads in? ;-)

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
    I had no clue what to do with those words. There's some really good ones in this contest. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Well, I only had to look up one of these words in the dictionary--"ZECCHINO"--so I suppose that's not too awfully shabby, LOL.
You've certainly managed to incorporate each and every word, Dawn, and you've created a funny but well written little rhyme for giraffmang's contest.

Best of luck in the booth!
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Hey thanks and I learned how to do your artwork thing, that was not as hard as my mind was telling me it would be. Thanks for the stop by.
reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Feb-2016
    Nah, it's really not too difficult once you get the hang of it.
    You're more than welcome, Dawn.
    ~Dean :)
reply by Anonymous Member on 04-Feb-2016
    Nah, it's really not too difficult once you get the hang of it.
    You're more than welcome, Dawn.
    ~Dean :)
Comment from foxangie123
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We got us a winner now. This is awesome as always. You are so good. Clever, brilliant, compassionate, and all the above. Talenteeeeed....

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Awwww so sweeeeeet. Thanks so much for your beautiful review.
reply by foxangie123 on 01-Feb-2016
    It was stunning. Thank you I do....
Comment from Cheryl9359
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Wow you did a great job on this, the best I have read so far. Mine was terrible I had the most awful words lol! I thought it was hard to do but fun too. You did awesome!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    They are terribly hard. I need to go read the ones out there. thanks so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from royowen
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A great expression in this interpretation of the artwork provided you, it is great that you have been inspired to write this wonderfully variable answer to the great artwork, I thoroughly enjoyed it, a great effort, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
reply by royowen on 01-Feb-2016
    Most welcome
Comment from dorts
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Writing poetry is very hard, I think you have to be in the mood and also trying to find a subject. I think we get all our poetry sense from the things in our everyday life and then there is the rhyming part, that is sometimes so hard to do. I loved your poem you have put a lot of thought into it and your pictures sum it up. Thank you for a good read.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. much appreciated.
Comment from Joyce Long
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Very well done by using the five words and making sense out of them. Cute poem, but I'm not up to the challenge. Thank you for sharing. I know I need to get busy writing, but sometimes its just too difficult to find the time. You have been with FanStory 13 years and I joined in September 2015. So I have a lot to learn. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce 02-01-16

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2016
    Actually it was hard to figure out how to rhyme and somewhat meter, although that part kind of went by the wayside and use those words. Not an easy task. I thank you so much for taking time to read and review.