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Oh Poop!

contest entry

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Comment from Green Lake Girl
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You have my vote in this contest. The best by far. I like your mention of the muse and alphabet soup. Very creative and humorous. Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
    Thank you so much Green Lake Girl :) I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed it and I truly appreciate your vote. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Lovinia
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Hy Mystery Poet

Another fab entry. This contest will be difficult to choose which limerick to vote for. A fun image to reflect your frustration. "Snoop/poop/soup" - hahaha! A whole lot of fun here and great wit. I've had a lovely chuckle. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Thanks for the syllable count in your notes. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
    Hi Lovi :)
    Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always...:)
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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LOL well at least that soup will occasionally spell something

that might just give inspiration.

My mind thought for sure you'd say i'm wading through, well you know, the title.
Great entry

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2016
    Hi Dawn :)
    Thank you for your great feedback...I actually changed the 'wading through gloop' line to 'plodding through poop' - I think it works better, tying in the title and also using a little alliteration! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Tessa Kay
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I love the drowning in alphabet soup. How funny!
Theoretically the last word should start with sn... as in snoop. Don't know how much they'll enforce that. But this is funny and original. All the best in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Hi Tessa :) thank you for your great feedback and also for creating this fun prompt! I appreciate your heads-up about the 'sn'... I've edited as suggested :) thanks again and kindest regards...:)
Comment from AnnieDawn
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I saw this contest offered and wondered what would be composed for it. I knew it had to be humorous and was looking forward to reading some humor and you have not disappointed me. In fact you had me in stitches. I only have one suggestion and that is to capitalize all of the lines as the fourth line starts with a lower case letter. Great job and this one is a winner.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much, Annie for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it and am happy to share a laugh with you :) kindest regards...
Comment from JanPerry
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The last line is very good, drowning in alphabet soup.
The whole things is rhyming well and you have satisfied the criteria here.
Thanks, well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Hi Jan :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi,
This had me chuckling how many of us have sat among a heap of discarded paper and nothing to show for it.
I love the artwork so appropriate.
Great.
Brenda

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Hi Brenda :) Thank you so much for your great feedback, I appreciate it! Writers block is the worst isn't it?! Couldn't resist entering this contest... Kindest regards :)
Comment from William Ross
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very good and well written i hope this isn't catchy. no really well done good rhyme and rhythm. good luck in the contest have a great day.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Hi William :) Thank you for your great comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...
Comment from Jeffers63
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such a fun piece of poetry and a great entry into the contest. I really enjoy the way you have put humour in to this piece. Well written.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
    Hi Jeffers63 :) Thank you for your great feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards...:)