Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is an absolutely exquisite piece of poetry dear Luna! The imagery is truly breathtaking and outstanding metaphors!
Thank you for sharing!
Virtual six!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

i like your kind enthusiasm, thank you!

Comment from jsalslamher

Average

I felt it was unique in the variety of words chosen to use however the picture I couldn't imagine because the thoughts were all over the place maybe zoom in a little more so we can see what the writer intended for us to see.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

i like variety of words, thanks.