Act of Endurance
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Comment from Sherman541
I get where this is coming from, mirror with reflections and having two sides of the people. People looking out, as you are looking in, maybe, This reminds more of something I read earlier today, that took me to yet another place. The previous that I read reminded me much of my Mother. This too reminds me of my Mother, but for a different sort of reason. My Mother had a heart attack and then two strokes there after. She was left with a feeding tube, unable to walk, talk or eat or drink. (how very sad that was) However, she was trapped within her own body. What you have written reminds me of that as well. Always looking out seeing, hearing, smelling, feeling and touching, but cannot speak or communicate. Thus, the old adage, " The eyes are the mirror to the soul" . Great visual too! Sherman541
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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I get where this is coming from, mirror with reflections and having two sides of the people. People looking out, as you are looking in, maybe, This reminds more of something I read earlier today, that took me to yet another place. The previous that I read reminded me much of my Mother. This too reminds me of my Mother, but for a different sort of reason. My Mother had a heart attack and then two strokes there after. She was left with a feeding tube, unable to walk, talk or eat or drink. (how very sad that was) However, she was trapped within her own body. What you have written reminds me of that as well. Always looking out seeing, hearing, smelling, feeling and touching, but cannot speak or communicate. Thus, the old adage, " The eyes are the mirror to the soul" . Great visual too! Sherman541
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Sad to hear your mother conditions, hope my write detailed a few pleasant memories about the event. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
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You are welcome and Yes I have many good memories and yes the poem did detail some good things too ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a thought about life inside of containment, as if inside the mirror there lives memory of us and our ideal of image living without our being reflecting; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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This speaks a thought about life inside of containment, as if inside the mirror there lives memory of us and our ideal of image living without our being reflecting; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Variety in my writes I try to accomplish, not really comfortable with their given conveyances, forever attempting to excite. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Pamusart
Ok, it took me awhile to get this. I reread the ending and then it hit me that this was about what happens in the mirror when we can't see. Is it an alternative world in which our doubles live? Intriguing thought. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Ok, it took me awhile to get this. I reread the ending and then it hit me that this was about what happens in the mirror when we can't see. Is it an alternative world in which our doubles live? Intriguing thought. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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The second read brought out the intended aim of this write, perhaps a better presentation could clear doubts. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Jacqueline1616
Very thought provoking. Reminds me a bit of that old series with Rod Sterling. (Can't recall the name). Anyway, your memory being an image that takes on it's own person after you walk away from the mirror. I like to ponder different ways of thinking. Don't like getting trapped into one ideal of something so vast. Thank you so much for sharing.
Jackie
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Very thought provoking. Reminds me a bit of that old series with Rod Sterling. (Can't recall the name). Anyway, your memory being an image that takes on it's own person after you walk away from the mirror. I like to ponder different ways of thinking. Don't like getting trapped into one ideal of something so vast. Thank you so much for sharing.
Jackie
Comment Written 28-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Indeed life inside a mirror has many probabilities, glad this write found acceptance and interests. Thanking you for generous rate and touching statements.
Comment from foxangie123
The picture is so neat. Your poem is so very perfect. Both together, wow. Anyways I love your uplifting and encouraging write. It is so very true and insightful. Rocks..
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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The picture is so neat. Your poem is so very perfect. Both together, wow. Anyways I love your uplifting and encouraging write. It is so very true and insightful. Rocks..
Comment Written 28-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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The picture is special as most I have found at FS. Glad this write connected. Thanking you for generous rate and inspiring thoughts.
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Stunning work..