A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Chained "Assorted poems of love
23 total reviews
Comment from pbroussard209
love the picture, and the poem goes nicely with it. You covered all the emotions of a break up well. I have been there too many times, I recognize, the pain and confusion a couple of my break-ups still remain with me to this day even though they happened twenty-five and thirty years ago.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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love the picture, and the poem goes nicely with it. You covered all the emotions of a break up well. I have been there too many times, I recognize, the pain and confusion a couple of my break-ups still remain with me to this day even though they happened twenty-five and thirty years ago.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
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Hello sweetie. Thanks for getting here and leaving this review, especially when I don't think there was any fanstory bucks on it.
Hugs,
Missy
Comment from Cheryl9359
Awww, I really like your poem. You describe how it feels to be left alone so well. The picture is awesome also! Great job on this and have a great week!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Awww, I really like your poem. You describe how it feels to be left alone so well. The picture is awesome also! Great job on this and have a great week!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hi Cheryl, thank you :)
It is always a pleasure to see a new name in my reviews :)
Missy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
= Another fantastic interpretation of the artwork.
= Sort of feels like we are in chains when someone leaves us, but the love remains one-sided.
= Excellent work, my friend.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hi, Missy
= Another fantastic interpretation of the artwork.
= Sort of feels like we are in chains when someone leaves us, but the love remains one-sided.
= Excellent work, my friend.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*>*) Jax
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2016
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Hi, Jax. Afternoon hon. I am delighted with your review sweet woman. Thank you :)
Missy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
well, this is not what I imagined an angel to look like... and surely would never want to see anything chained within a capture of much more than just the physical aspect.
You do know how to evoke the power of the 'pain' within a trapped heart... your mind composes it so very well... like all you have hiding underneath your smooth exterior, there is a deeper need to be whole to the passion that drives your soul... to love unconditionally and be loved unconditionally in return.
Yes, another truly beautiful presentation of your connection to both heart and soul.
One small suggestion... you know me by now, I spend time on everything I read... I read multiple times... and while I do know the meaning of your line 'Or someone else?'
What changed between us?
Was it me,
Or is there someone else?
To me, just feels more complete on what you're saying... hope you don't mind... as you know I do love the way you write... and maybe it's just me?
No matter, beautifully composed and presented... yeah, come to think of it, an angel like that would definitely get me into a load of tar to go with those feathers.
With our thoughts we create,
weak links,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Hi Missy,
well, this is not what I imagined an angel to look like... and surely would never want to see anything chained within a capture of much more than just the physical aspect.
You do know how to evoke the power of the 'pain' within a trapped heart... your mind composes it so very well... like all you have hiding underneath your smooth exterior, there is a deeper need to be whole to the passion that drives your soul... to love unconditionally and be loved unconditionally in return.
Yes, another truly beautiful presentation of your connection to both heart and soul.
One small suggestion... you know me by now, I spend time on everything I read... I read multiple times... and while I do know the meaning of your line 'Or someone else?'
What changed between us?
Was it me,
Or is there someone else?
To me, just feels more complete on what you're saying... hope you don't mind... as you know I do love the way you write... and maybe it's just me?
No matter, beautifully composed and presented... yeah, come to think of it, an angel like that would definitely get me into a load of tar to go with those feathers.
With our thoughts we create,
weak links,
James vx's.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Dear, James, I certainly see your thoughts on that line and will move to change it :) LOL I will keep her locked away so you never have to worry about the "tar and feathers".
Thank you so much for always being so generous with your time and reviews. They mean a lot.
Missy xx
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As you know, my complete pleasure... and well, an honor to be able to have access to your writing and heart... thanks my friend...vx's.
Comment from ciliverde
You describe well that awful, panicked feeling when a loved one leaves you - I think the way you put it is right on, although I never thought of it that way before. They never do come back though, do they - and if they do there's always that grain of doubt.
Well done, my friend!
Carol
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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You describe well that awful, panicked feeling when a loved one leaves you - I think the way you put it is right on, although I never thought of it that way before. They never do come back though, do they - and if they do there's always that grain of doubt.
Well done, my friend!
Carol
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Hi Carol, no I don't believe they do :(
The chains are of our own making though...we must break free of the past in order to really see the future :)
Thank you for this lovely review, hon.
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of reading another of your enjoyable poems. I'm not so sure about the picture though, I'm afraid that it might corrupt my innocent mind with ideas of . . . yes, some of those ideas. :-) Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Thanks for the pleasure of reading another of your enjoyable poems. I'm not so sure about the picture though, I'm afraid that it might corrupt my innocent mind with ideas of . . . yes, some of those ideas. :-) Great job. :-)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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LOL...my job is done, then...
Corruption of the mind...my job :)
Thanks hon for the laugh and the off the chain review!
Missy
Comment from William Ross
Very good and very well written. powerful message. A great free verse style poem. love the picture with this. Thanks for sharing. have a great day.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Very good and very well written. powerful message. A great free verse style poem. love the picture with this. Thanks for sharing. have a great day.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Hello, William, nice to see your name here in my reviews again. :)
Thank you for being here and making me smile. Oh...and for this review, almost forgot that...lol
Missy
Comment from evilynne
I'm guessing this is about love lost. The picture is awesome, as is your poetic interpretation of this. I did enjoy your writing. Evi
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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I'm guessing this is about love lost. The picture is awesome, as is your poetic interpretation of this. I did enjoy your writing. Evi
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Thanks so much, Evi, for this wonderful review of my work. :)
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. Wow! This is a different slant on the theme of lost love. I would imagine it would feel like being imprisoned or chained up with a life void of a missing partner. Good job here all the way.
Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Hi, Missy. Wow! This is a different slant on the theme of lost love. I would imagine it would feel like being imprisoned or chained up with a life void of a missing partner. Good job here all the way.
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Hello there, you!!! I hope you are doing well. Thanks for the awesome review, sug. I think I have grown so much over this past year being around such splendid writers as yourself. :)
Missy
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:) A pleasure. Bob
Comment from Pantygynt
I regard this as a rather jaundiced comment on a relationship gone sour on at least one side. The subject feels chained and imprisoned whether physically or metaphorically it matters not while the other half of the relationship has gone off. It may be that this is not a desertion for ever, but what matters to the subject is that she feels deserted yet somehow still constrained by the bonds of the relationship.
The short lines of free verse convey the sense of panic and desperation.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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I regard this as a rather jaundiced comment on a relationship gone sour on at least one side. The subject feels chained and imprisoned whether physically or metaphorically it matters not while the other half of the relationship has gone off. It may be that this is not a desertion for ever, but what matters to the subject is that she feels deserted yet somehow still constrained by the bonds of the relationship.
The short lines of free verse convey the sense of panic and desperation.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Gynt, for this very detailed and insightful review :)
Missy