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Poems and Essays

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Comment from Unspoken94
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What I like about your poetry, Teri, is that you don't
pound people over the head with your faith. This poem
almost feels like a poem of recovery. You are taking it
one day at a time.
Regarding control. I think you have more control than
you give yourself credit. The Lord is clearly the center of
your life, but you still have free will. You still must choose
to follow him each moment, day, week. -Bill

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
    Amen
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Teri

Isn't it amazing how far off the track we can become.
I am grateful for the atonement and the saving grace of Jesus Christ.

We have both been fooled into thinking that happiness could be found in wickedness. I am sure we never thought of it when we were running with Satan.
I am proud of you

Bear

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
    Amen
Comment from LanceHill
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This was very beautiful. The peace that comes when we completely turn everything over to God is great. God is the ultimate healer. He promises to never leave us or forsake us. Have a great weekend. God bless.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
    Amen
Comment from anabellapongasi
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Hi Teri,
This is a beautiful poem of joy, celebrating victory over the devil through Jesus.
Satan is always trying to take our Joy, he is trying to do his job overtime because he knows his end is near.
Thank you for sharing this inspired and inspiring piece.
Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2016
    Amen
Comment from Bryana
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Dear Teresa,
You've written a beautiful poem
about life. God forgives us and we feel at ease
to keep on living.
There is a change in you, for the better I am
sure.
I wish the best dear friend.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Yes my friend. I went to Bible Study last night. It was a wonderful time. Hugs, Teri
Comment from damommy
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Very good. Flows well and tells a good story. It conveys what you're been through as far as resentment of illness. I like this.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you my friend. I went to Bible Study last night. It was a great service. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Teri

I really like your natural way of you expressing your feelings about how God saved your soul from the temptations of the devil.

Gert

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Hey Gert. I went to Bible Study last night. We had a wonderful service. Hugs, Teri
reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Jan-2016
    Good Bible study is a great thing for the mind and soul.

    Gert
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Don't know what kind of curse Satan had poet under. I am so glad she escaped these mighty grips. What does MS stand for? Is it multiple sclerosis? Poem is very spiritual and a true tribute to Jesus, Our Lord and Savior. Photo attests to the joyful verses of the poet, showing her jumping for joy. liberty justice

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you my friend. I went to Bible Study last night. It was a real blessing. Hugs, Teri
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Teri,

You have a great title, author notes and artwork choice to accompany your poem of faith, resolve, praise and love for the Lord...I like how you show your thankful attitude in spite of health challenges. You have rhymed this nicely and I like how you mention that you will stay focused on the important things and mostly the Lord.

My favorite line:

"I have a change in me and people can tell"

Thank you for sharing this,
Linda

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you my friend. I went to Bible Study last night. It was wonderful. I have missed it so much. Hugs, Teri
reply by AnnaLinda on 14-Jan-2016
    oh...I'm glad Teri!
Comment from William Ross
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very nice, very well written, Great rhyme and a great flow when read. thanks for sharing this. have a wonderful day ahead of you.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much for the great review. Hugs, Teri