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Poems By AnnieDawn

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My book of poems and stories

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Comment from pharp
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Excellent job in the penning of this poem. The rhyming and meter are excellent, the flow of this poem very smooth, allowing for a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and the very best in the contest. Blessings...............Portia

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
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For years I have used nothing to cleanse my face, but the shampoo I use on my hair and my skin looks great for a 77 year old woman. Patricia

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Judvan2
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Very real, very fun. I can relate completely. The words are great, the rhyming perfect. The rhetorical question answered...Thanks for writing. Picture works great too.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

This a smooth flowing piece that does exactly what the competition asks of you. It is quite amusing too, well thought out piece.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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I'm sorry dear but I think perhaps it might be a little too much to ask. Take it from me at 54 and still can't seem to find the answer. When you figure it out please do pass it on. Great read.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Jeffers63
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This is a great example of what the contest asks you to write, I hear the question loud and clear. Thank you for this great example for us all to learn from.

Regards
Jeffers63

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    I actually have never used any of the products mentioned in my poem. They came from ads on TV. Thanks for reviewing, I had fun with this one.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Ha! This brought a smile. Women buy all kinds of expensive products for their skin. I've been using Pond's Cold Cream for years and at 73, it's the best bang for the buck.
Check here in your poem:
"I've tried the the (omit second "the") sloppy mud mask.
Best of luck with the prompt.
Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much. The second 'the' has been overlooked for days and no one has ever pointed it out before. I appreciate your 'good eye'. I have gone in and made the change already. Thanks again.
Comment from foxangie123
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My name is Angie and you may use my name if you decide to go to Paramount Song as this could become some awesome lyric poetically found. You have what it takes and the music industry is looking for new stuff. It's up to you. It's free and may be a huge wage earner for you.. Seriously..

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Thanks for the tip and review. Have a good day.
Comment from frogbook
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Love it. Great and clever use of the prompt. The presentation and art were well done. The rhyming was compelling and smooth throughout. And it was also quite funny! Best of luck.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
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A woman should allow allow herself to age gracefully. It is far better then to walk around wearing ten pounds of makeup. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2016

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
    Isn't it strange how many creams and cosmetics are purchased each year by women. I have never tried the products I mentioned in this poem , but got the info off of TV commercials. I had fun putting this together. Thanks for your kind review.
reply by c_lucas on 14-Jan-2016
    You're welcome.